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Title: Peeru Fanfic
Post by: Death 999 on March 11, 2008, 03:04:11 pm
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In one of the large administrative halls of the Druuge trade world hung Peeru. Head pointed down at her tiny knee-mounted screens, she was sifting through the logs of a very important customer, who was now approaching. This customer was very important because it was the only customer they had had in an embarrassingly long time. It was this customer which might restore meaning to the once-powerful department.

The orange lamps which provided a jaunty illumination to the upper echelons did little to break the darkness below. She had climbed out of the murky depths herself, but she still had a heads-down job. But that was all right. She knew she was moving up. Masters of alien communication were rare, and those with a firm grasp on the domestic arts were rarer still. The combination was powerful. She had job security.

"Peeru! What is the meaning of this?" thundered Foomp, the director of offworld trade.

"The meaning of what, precisely?" Peeru, startled, abandoned the logs, to look up to Foomp's slow, wide, menacing arc above her.

"I just got out of a meeting concering the incoming Precursor vessel. The presentation you prepared on our offers did not convey to the management the quality of the work we do here. Do I need to remind you how this department has been reduced since our major trading partners were eradicated?" Peeru caught a clearer glance at his face, and realized he was not so much angry as afraid.

"Not at all, Director. My report contained everything we have done, and that is quite adequate; if the management is not happy, it is not because of that!" exclaimed Peeru.

Foomp stabilized closely in front of her, such that Peeru had to crane her neck to see him at all.
"If it is not the report, then why did I receive a complaint about you from a vice president of the Crimson Coporation itself?"

"Er, which one?" Peeru said. Why would any vice president even be aware of me?

"The vice president of acquisitions. You aren't being productive enough, she said. Well, get productive then!" His chain leads had already shifted away, and the motion worked its way down to his end just as he finished speaking.

Normally, he'd close with a compliment on my work, but this time... can't contradict a vice president. What's going on here?

Foomp's admonition had instilled the reflexive need to appear busy: Peeru realized she had brought up a sales chart and massaged it to make it less obvious that the most recent sale had not occurred this year. No time for that; I need to assuage the ire of the top, fast! Can I call Kahso? He's in that department, and he owes me at least a heads-down.

Trembling, Peeru keyed her console to arrange a meeting with the assistant director of acquisitions. While she waited, she idly noted that the Precursor vessel was lining up to dock. Foomp can take care of it from here, and while I'll need to analyze, that can be done from the recording. This, though, is urgent.

"Acquisitions office. Who is calling?"

"I would like to - I need to speak with the assistant director of acquisitions."

"Who is calling?"

"The assistant to the director of offworld trade."

Of course the secretary would stall, so she added, "In case you hadn't noticed, we have an offworld trader present; if the acquisition priorities have changed, we need to know now or the wrong things will be bought. Say, what's your name?"

A moment later, she had Kahso. "Assistant director of Acquisitions." He did a double-take as he recognized her, but he did not say her name, and indeed grew nervous. This is not good. Everyone knows but me?

While Peeru thought of this, she let her excuse come out; Kahso simply answered in the negative. She hadn't finished thinking when the silence had stretched a few moments longer than company policy permitted. Still, Kahso knew her and gave her a chance before cutting off the call.

"Is that all?"

"No! Do you know the Vice President of Development?"

Kahso blanched. "Yes. Peeru, we're negotiating a PIRR."

"Congratulations!" If dangerous. She lengthened her chain to him, and can discard him.

"Don't schmooze me. Just because we had a once I had a PIRR with you doesn't mean I'll lengthen my chain again."

What does that mean? First, Assistant director is not significantly higher than Assistant to the director, so even if we were to reopen Preliminary Investigation into Residential Reassessment, which we won't, it wouldn't be a chain-lengthening. Or is he just saying my entire department is worthless?

Peeru, stop quibbling: the main implication is she must be jealous! Distance! Get distance!

"Kahso, there were perfectly good reasons our PIRR terminated with no further contract."

"Yes: I prefer my women more feminine."

The abrasive comment stunned her.

What? Just because I have a knack for languages and and chose to study them long after it was clear I'd end up female doesn't mean I don't have a good egg-pouch and a head for numbers. Does he think assistant to the director is a social position, or that any vice president at all is not? What kind of fuzzy-brained man-thinking is this? Does he need to take the offensive gratuitously? Or is she really so jealous that he is he trying to protect me by insulting me? No. Knowing him, he's just yanking me around.

But the line was dead before she could reply.

This call itself has put me in serious danger. How long do I have before she finds out and just has me fired? Reassignment wouldn't be effective for this. Peeru glanced down to the great funnel that comprised the floor of the vast chamber. She had not considered in years that it might be her destination.

Her monitor of the Precursor vessel grabbed her attention back to her knees. Foomp was speaking with their captain.

"Since this is your first time trading with us, Captain, allow me to explain our standard operating procedures..."

Peeru looked at the other side, to the captain. Might as well do my job vigorously so she has less excuse! Some people have been known to survive the ire of directors in different departments, if they were especially productive. Could the same be true of a vice president?

She jotted down some notes on his reactions, probing for weaknesses, interests. "Seems unwilling to trade crew."

As she prepared to send the note off to Foomp's panel, the captain said, "I will never sell my crew to be your slaves."

She deleted it and sent out "Emphasize object-for-object trades, he should be more willing."
Better, but I'm not going to get anywhere like this. Penetrating insight, where are you? Oh no, Foomp is taking the "You have the right" angle. That never works! We'll be lucky if he doesn't just undock.

Foomp's reply arrived: "You didn't say they HAD anything else. We'll be lucky if he doesn't just undock."

How does he do that? Even I didn't see him enter the message.

Peeru scrambled to review their scans. Immediately, she sent: "Vortex Spawner. Mycon fragments." and then, "Incidentally, that VP is personally jealous of me and wants me out of the way. How doomed am I?"

No response. Of course, Foomp was in the middle of explaining the captain's rights to him.
Without missing a beat, Foomp injected into the conversation, "We note you possess a Vortex Spawner. In exchange for the simple device we will give you three Mauler starships and fill your fuel tanks, at no extra charge."

Now this is something, even if it's bad news. Well, here goes: "Forget it, he's too attached. He'd only sell for, say, thirty or fifty Maulers, even more than its worth to us."

Foomp went on, "We know that you have Mycon Deep Child egg case fragments aboard your vessel. Would you consider trading them to us for a shiny new Mauler starship, instead?"

The captain seemed confused. Here's my chance! She took notes: "Captain does not seem to know what a Deep Child even is." Oh no. Even if this were a penetrating insight, what profit could be made of it? I'm doomed! Wait! His relief seems to make him even more eager for the sale! Fabulous, we should write this up as a new method! But her hands slipped as the weight on her chains disppeared.

Her scream was lost in the general roar.
And then, she stopped screaming. This isn't what being dropped in the furnace is like: my chains are still on!

Her drop turned into a swing, and she was being rapidly pulled through the cavernous halls of the trade center. Which direction is this? I've never been here before, I think. What's going on?

At this moment, she realized she had a message. Tapping her inner toe to accept it, she strained to bring her elbow close enough to her ear to hear over the wind. It was from Foomp. "Very... of the way, isn't... !" She managed to get her ear closer, but the message was over. Very out of the way, isn't it. Where is out of the way?

Suddenly, her careening progress slowed, giving her time to see a confused captain heading the opposite way. She swung through a bulkhead which slammed behind her, and suddenly, silence.
No, not silence, though close. A humming sound, like the turbines of the great furnaces, but higher-pitched and softer. The walls shook, rocking her in her chains.

There was a soft but resonant sound of metal colliding with metal, and finally her chains settled into more stable positions, though not the one she was used to. As she got her bearings, her displays configured back into a workstation. A quick query: "What is the function of this station?"

"Mauler command station."

Peeru looked up reflexively to ask a question of her boss; but of course there was only the ceiling. Her stomach felt as if it had been sent to the furnace. Of all the dead-end jobs in the universe, mauler captain has to be the worst! No profit opportunity, plenty of expenses, very few subordinates. Foomp, I had something else in mind!

Then, she looked down. Well, let's see who we have here. I see only two crew here. Odd.

A query to the console: "Where are the crew?"

"Four in the engine room, one on sensors and communications, one on the weapon, one navigator, and one cook. Five are in their resting cubes."

Thirteen. Not bad, I guess. Still, I need to talk to Foomp. Trading should be done by now, Foomp favors the quick deal.

She keyed in a request to talk to her supervisor.

In the moments that followed, she considered what she would say. Complain? A little late now. Thanks? Not hardly. And anyway, what strings could he pull to get me transferred to a starship? He's not naval, he has no authority. Except over the few ships we had for... Oh no...

"Zelnick here. Welcome to the New Alliance of Free Stars, captain!"

Peeru quickly adapted, thinking of a question she would need to ask of her new... supervisor. "I expect you'd like to meet, when would be good?"

"How about in an hour, once we're done with the main burn. We'll release the grav mooring and you can dock. Just *walk* right on up to the bridge, you can't miss it."

"I'm sorry, my translation computer is having difficulty. *Walk*?"

The captain stood up and moved around his chair. His arms are not attached, that isn't a restraint! His feet as well. How does his... Ah, he is not just a captain, he is the head of the whole organization. Naturally. But this... walking. Can I do it?

The captain sat back down again. "Do you ever take those chains off?" he mused.

"They're terribly convenient for getting around." And being gotten around.

"Well, we don't have them here. I can kill the gravity so you can float free, does that work?"

Just like in a resting cube. A meeting in a resting cube -- there's a reason that's a euphemism. But not this time. Thankfully. Or... should I? He is young, serious advantages could be derived. And I'm... unattached. "It should work."

"Okay. You can pop in right... here." The display flashed a diagram of the Precursor vessel with the docking point highlighted; the comm link closed.

Now, I have two problems to solve. First, dock the ship. Second, figure out how to get off the chain network.

Peeru hastily explored the unfamiliar command console. Perhaps it knows how to dock itself. Docking... auto on standard configurations only. No deal. Time to get to know the crew, I guess.


No response.

"Navigator, would you bring us to dock, according to the given specification? I need to rig up the custom docking rig." Don't let them know how little I know at first.

She replied, "Captain... I'm just navigator. I don't know how to pilot."

Peeru exploded. "Foomp!" An incompetent crew. Just what I needed.

"Pardon? The captain pilots the ship."

"Who here pilots when the captain is resting?"

"The lieutenant would, but he is, ah, fresh. Captain Faazur had always handled it."

Peeru sent a call to lieutenant... Muugko, the org chart indicated. She tried her best authoritative voice. "Lieutenant Muugko! This is captain Peeru."

A groggy young man shortly appeared, still in his resting cube, though dressed. Odd, they have comm setups in resting cubes? I guess they would, for emergencies. "Yes... captain?"

"Report to the command center within three minutes."

"If I may ask, where is Captain Faazur?"

"I do not know. Not on board and not your commanding officer anymore, anyway. I was transferred here abruptly."

Muugko absorbed this for a few seconds, and nodded.

"Very well. We will dock in fifty-five minutes." whatever those are... let the computer translate it. "I am unlocking flight controls to you. You work out how to get us docked to this thing, I'll work with engineering to get the mooring right."

She then set her chains to go to engineering. A mechanical problem. I was always good with those...

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 2
Post by: Death 999 on March 11, 2008, 03:04:36 pm
Peeru felt ridiculous, huddled into her resting cube - to her surprise, it was her actual resting cube with her belongings - and floated up the docking tube. Yet it was the only way they had devised to transfer her that would not set off the ship's revolt-suppression system. Captain Faazur's transfer had been too hasty for the involved process of transferring many command privileges, including the captain's immunity to revolt suppression, to be finished yet. Even the manned extra-vehicular repair system had not freed her.

The cube floated free and into the docking bay of the precursor vessel, which was not quite large enough to accommodate her entire ship. Now to get this thing open. Without the ship around, it should be doable.

She saw the captain through the surface of the cube. He jumped up to catch it, did, and was carried by its momentum into the far wall, where he made a soft landing. He knows what he's doing in free-fall.

He said something, muffled by the hard shell. Then his fingers found the release and the hatch was open. A blast of cold air hit her. Only now do I remember that their preferred temperature is much lower than ours. Fabulous.

"I didn't realize you'd toss in a Rosy Cube as a bonus!"


"Your transfer cube... it's red."

She looked at it. Transfer cube? Phew, he doesn't realize how hacked-together this all was. "No, not like this! The Rosy Sphere is an artifact of immense power..."

"I was joking."

He wasn't fooled. Of course, we knew that, since he passed it up for the ship. She got a look around the chamber - largely empty, with a planet lander near a square hatch. They didn't look so big until she realized how far away they were. A mist of dust hung lightly in the air, scattering the harsh blue light.

The captain continued. "So, captain... Faazur, was it?" He extended his hand.

"No, Peeru." She shook his hand in the fashion indicated by their cultural studies.

"Ah. Well, Captain Peeru, welcome aboard the Vindicator. I see you're interested in the lander?"

"I've never seen..." I was going to say I've never seen a spaceship from the outside before, but that wouldn't sound quite right coming from a captain.

"I hope you didn't mind my doing a little mining in your home system?" A slight fluctuation in his breathing. That was a laugh, right?

"It was legal." We had mined that entire moon, and they find and extract a dozen deposits buried kilometers below the surface in a matter of hours. It's a pity they're integrally attached to the ship so they couldn't be sold... and that Foomp didn't want to insult him by offering to buy the whole ship.

A beat passed, and he wiped his nose with the back of his sleeve.

"What do you know of our Alliance?"

How to put it? I don't want to reveal how much I actually do know.

He continued, taking her silence as admission of ignorance, and spoke in grandiose terms of things she already knew. She remained attentive, asking questions, ignored the cold... and then realized she was floating too far from the wall to reach anything. Zelnick continued for a moment before noticing her situation. "Say, have you spent much time in space?"

"Ever since I can remember. But I always had the harness to hold me in place."

The captain frowned. "Always?"

"Why, yes, except ..." she would have continued but she was shivering uncontrollably.

"Are you okay?"

Peeru couldn't speak, recalled the gesture used by Zelnick's culture, and shook her head.

Zelnick narrowed his eyes for a moment, but soon disappeared through a hatch. A few moments later, he returned with a blanket. Pulling himself along the grips in the floor with his hands while holding the blanket between his legs, he got directly under her; then snagging a grip with his foot, he swung the blanket up to her. Peeru grabbed onto it -- it was already warm -- and wrapped herself in it. Zelnick pulled her down to the floor and held her in place.

"Sorry about the temperature."

Peeru remained silent simply for cold, but she was warming rapidly: the blanket was actively heating.

He towed her to the hatch and tapped a panel. "Fenson, synth up some warm clothing for captain Peeru."

Peeru urgently asked, "Captain, how much does this cost? And what is the... pay... here?"

Zelnick laughed. "I suppose you would ask that. This? Fits under the clothing ration. We have luxury rations, and that's more like pay; and access to the park and computers. I suppose that could count too."

Rations. Doesn't sound gradiated. "What is the incentive for high performance, then?"
The captain stopped, with the side effect that Peeru gently swung around and bounced off the wall/ceiling in front of him. "Captain. We're trying to save the galaxy here. Everyone else here calls that an incentive. Don't you?"

"This situation is new to me. I don't know. Is saving the galaxy our job now?" But that's a lot harder than saving yourself!

"Bingo! How about I show you our situation." He resumed pulling her, and turned at a branch in the tunnel. No, 'corridor'. They were on the bridge -- she recognized it from the transmissions she had monitored not two hours previously. Looking at the main viewscreen, she was startled by the progress of the ship -- they were already significantly away from the Trade World.

Zelnick put her in a giant chair, and ran a loose strap over her. I could get out of this in a heartbeat. Obviously not intended as a genuine restraint.

"A little less gravity, please?" Peeru asked. He seems obliging, might as well indulge.

"No problem. Er." He held out something white and droopy toward her.


"Your nose is dripping."

He actually seems disgusted. Well, with it falling to the ground right here, I can see why. She grabbed what he was offering, and sopped up the excretion.

He then seated himself in the center seat and got to work: gravity gradually returned until it was crushingly heavy. Also, the display changed to an enormous hyperspace map. There was a flashing mark way off in the southeast corner, and Peeru recognized it as their present location, in Druuge space.

The captain gestured to the map. "These, roughly, are our allies." The viewscreen showed several circles. Peeru read the labels' Druuge transliterations, below, then noticed the English and was pleased to be able to read it: Arilou, Spathi, Pkunk, Zoq-Fot-Pik, and Tanaka. I've never heard of that species.  By the time she had finished reading, gravity had receded to a tolerable level.

"These presumably would be, but they're under slave shields." Notes appeared for Chenjesu, Mmrnmhrm, and Syreen.

"We aren't sure what the deal is with these." Yehat and Androsynth/Orz appeared, and a row of question marks in the far northwest corner.

"These are our enemies." The screen was inundated. Ur-Quan and Kohr-Ah dominated the map, with Umgah, VUX, Mycon, and Ilwrath rounding out the edges.

"Though it would be wonderful for us all to get along... for some, it isn't happening. In particular, the Kohr-Ah. They want to annihilate all life other than themselves, and they don't even bother to hide it."

Stopping them is a project I can get on board. They wiped out the Gg and Burvix, our best trading partners! I wouldn't even be here if it wasn't for them.

"As for the rest, we're not sure." The Yehat appeared, and an unmarked circle in the opposite corner from the Druuge.

As the logs suggested - they don't know about the Utwig.

"So, everyone else here is dedicated. I don't know what you are, but I'll settle for obedient if that's all you can muster."

Peeru nodded again.

"Now, tell me about your ship."

For a moment, Peeru panicked, but she recalled the sales pitch and settled in. "The mauler sports a powerful long-range weapon combined with a unique retro-thrust system which helps maintain range."

Zelnick interrupted. "Tracking?"


"Does the weapon follow the target?"

"The targeting system is of unparalleled quality."

He demonstrated with his hands. "After you fire, does the weapon adjust course to hit the target?"

"No. The shots are so fast, there won't be time for evasion."

Zelnick nodded, and she went on. "Also, while many other ships will often find themselves short of energy to use their weapons, the Mauler will never be short. With its unique fuelling configuration, additional hydrogen can be fed into the furnace, providing a rapid energy boost. In this..."

Again, Zelnick interrupted. "What... er... does this involve, ah..."

Foomp used the phrase 'feeding the furnace' again. What a fool. "The captain is understood to be the best one to understand the battle, correct?"


"If the ship will shortly come under fire, which will certainly cause casualties, can the captain take action to minimize those casualties?"

"Of course. Anything else would be..." He paused.

He doesn't want to follow the logic, but he sees it. "Even if that means choosing the casualties?"

"How effective is your ship without 'feeding the furnace'?"

"The mere threat of firing is usually enough to make an enemy pull off their attack. If this works, combat can be prolonged until the combat batteries are regenerated conventionally. If not, then there is a choice between choosing the casualty or letting the enemy choose for you. And they will probably not choose only one."

Judging by the signs from the cultural database, though he's quiet, he's mad now. "Here are your orders, captain Peeru: train on the use of your ship without sacrificing your crew. Practice against the other captains and the computer. Captain Wu will handle this. You are dismissed. No. Wait. Put up nets so that if anyone is dropped despite my orders, they will not fall into the furnace anyway."

"Yes, captain. The ship is yours to cripple as you see fit."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 3
Post by: Death 999 on March 11, 2008, 03:04:57 pm
Back on board, Peeru finally had time to consider her situation calmly. My hurried and loose commands in the first few moments made a mixed impression. First, they knew I know nothing about the ship; but, they know I trust them to do their jobs, and I'm not quick to mete out punishment. That's probably a nice change, but it could lead to chaos in a hurry. Or will it?

What change does their knowing the furnace is not to be used going to make? Well, ships have a much stricter accountability system than the trade-world, since the potential for revolt in such a small space is that much greater; but in the end most of that accountability falls on the captain. Firing crew is a great loss, and that loss must be explained. Captains definitely have their methods for avoiding the invocation of the revolt suppression system.

It can't just be the combat exemption to a firing inquiry; but I never looked into what they were. The logs might reveal something.

As for my situation here: among those in the engine room, I think Wugyup is too simple-minded to look far enough ahead to revolt, and Nabek is too distracted by the upcoming dimorphism to be thinking mutiny. As for the rest, who knows.

Well, I may as well look over the logs to see what can be found out about the rest of the crew, before I issue the command to have the net constructed. I don't want a revolt on my hands. Oh, look - the ship is named '1038'. How precious.

The logs contained no hints of revolt -- of course. What captain would include such devastating information in his reports?

Peeru was interrupted by a message from the communications officer. "The precursor vessel is requesting that we un-dock. Permission?"

"Proceed. Return to our tractor berth."

Peeru returned to the logs, wondering what useful information could be gleaned from them. I might be able to detect the brown-nosers from overly glowing recommendations, I suppose. But that's more of a long-term issue, not a short-term one of figuring out if it's safe to drop the automatic death threat. Well, if it doesn't work, what's the worst that could happen? I don't think they'll kill me for saving their lives.

Once they were safely separated, Peeru made the announcement and order. Reaction was muted. Probably they don't know whether it came from me, in which case I'm dangerously soft-hearted; or from above, in which case they have no reason to give me any credit.

Credit. That's how I can figure out what the attitudes of the crew are. How have they been paid?

As it turned out, the figures were very familiar; but from the other side, now she wished she hadn't been scrimping on this aspect of the budget quite so much. If they find out what my job was, I'll be killed in my sleep.

Suddenly, a feeling of dizziness overcame her, and she nearly gagged on nothing in particular. It wasn't just her -- all the chains she could see had been set to rocking. What was that? What's with the sky? Oh. We entered hyperspace. Well, once you're into it, it's not so bad. The worst is over.

A moment later, it got worse, as things went from red to green.

Once things settled down, before she herself was settled down, the communications officer -- he was Trifop, she recalled from the logs -- alerted her that an intership communication was arriving from one of the other vessels.

An unfamiliar human appeared on her screen. "Captain, welcome to the New Alliance of Free Stars! I'm captain Wu. Captain Zelnick just told me to spar with you so you could accustom yourself to a different fighting style and so we can figure out how to fit you into our battle group. When would you like to get started?"

First I had better figure out how to fly in the first place!

"How about..." she rapidly converted "... in fourteen hours? There are some modifications to my ship that were ordered, and I have had a very long day."

"The sooner the better. We don't have numbers on our side, so we'll need every crewman to be elite. But don't worry too much, you should have seen our Spathi take care of that Kohr-Ah ship we ran across. They tore it to pieces. Wouldn't have been as pretty if there had been more than one, though, or if we hadn't had three eluders. And that's where you might come in. Keep them from sitting there behind a minefield, or better yet, knock them out of it completely."

"I see." Maybe I do.

"Well, I'll see you at 0600 then."

Peeru did not sleep until she had learned enough of the controls not to embarrass herself the next morning. This gave her only a few hours of rest; and yet, as she did, she knew that with the construction of the safety net, her personal safety net was being eroded. But, fitfully, rest she did.


The next morning's practice started off catastrophically. In ten simulated battles over three hours, she only once landed a hit on Wu's cruiser.

Now I'm beginning to see why Zelnick asked whether the weapon is tracking. It may be possible to hit with this thing, but it requires a lot of practice.

Boom. A signal that the last simulated nuke had hit her tenth ship, and it was over.

"Captain Peeru, are you..."

"Captain Wu, I'd like to see you try this. Your ship has a tiny target profile. My ship is designed to keep the enemy at range, but that's where you like to be. It's not a good combination."

"I think I will. You don't properly lead the target, and your orbital strategy is horrible."

A few seconds later, they had their controls swapped. Wu complained, "I don't like flying like this. I don't know what any of your specialized indicators mean."

And I didn't know what my indicators really meant anyway! Now things are even.

"I'm in the same situation, and we both have the basics. Go!"

Two minutes later, Wu's Mauler was radioactive slag, with only one hit scored on Peeru's Cruiser.
A better rate than I had against him, but not so good that it's not clear that I had a point.
Captain Wu had a somewhat more respectful tone when he came back on the line. "All right, I suppose it's a good thing we're on the same side. Hmm. Well, let's see how you'd do against a Dreadnought."

That wasn't exactly the kind of change I was thinking of!

This fight went surprisingly better. She was able to avoid the fighters well enough, and the dreadnought was large enough she could hit it from time to time. Eventually, though, her fuel supply ran low when she needed to avoid a pack of fighters, they swarmed her, and that was that.
Wu said, "That was interesting. Your ship gets worn down very easily. But before it does, it's quite capable."

"There is a system to replenish energy..."

"... which we aren't allowed to use. So, we're just going to have to buy you time. Also, did you notice that the main problem was the fighters?"

"Of course!"

"Dreadnoughts don't direct fighters towards cruisers: we destroy them too easily. Perhaps we should do a two on one battle? You and me against a dreadnought, twice. Either of us would probably lose, let's see if we can win together. You keep them from catching up, I keep them from launching fighters, and contribute a bit of extra firepower. We'll need to stick together, so don't get trigger-happy."

It went largely as he described. Toward the end, though, the remaining dreadnought shifted focus from Wu to Peeru and managed to destroy her ship.

As he was finishing up, Wu commented, "Lining up these shots is dangerous, it was damaged enough you didn't need to do that. You probably wanted to even up our score, right? Well, don't. Especially in a combined-arms situation, it isn't the number hits you score that's important, it's whether you accomplish your role. You knocked each of them back enough times that I could do my damage in time. If that was all you had done, keep them at range, you would have been tripling my effectiveness. Not that that would make you twice as valuable as me. I mean..."

"You mean we leveraged the synergy of our core competencies into an enhanced combat portfolio?"

"You could say that. But don't."


When her practice session was finished, Peeru turned to her rest cube and left the hatch open to stare out the main port. The unfamiliar green chaotic sky taunted her. The red sky of hyperspace would have been unfamiliar enough, but this was far worse. No one knew where they would come out. Or if Zelnick did, he hadn't mentioned it in the logs that had been scanned from the ship's computers. But on top of that, she was in a position with no room for advancement or profit. And lots of chances to get blown up in nuclear or antimatter explosions.

Just as she was drifting off, Muugko called her. "Second watch finished, captain."


"It is your turn."

"I've gotten two hours of sleep in the past two days. Can you stay on watch for a bit?"

"The second watch is finished, captain."

"Plus one-third overtime pay." Chances are low I'd get authorization, but this point, I could take it out of my salary. It's not as if I'll ever get to spend it.

"Sleep well, captain."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 4
Post by: Death 999 on March 11, 2008, 03:05:17 pm
Peeru woke and almost started her usual morning routine. It was hard to tell that she was in a completely different spacetime system than she had been in the last time she had genuinely slept. But now that she was well-rested and recovered, she realized that Muugko's being on the bridge was time-and-a-third of a lieutenant's salary falling out of her pocket. And with her new position as a captain, that was a distressingly large fraction of her own salary.

She put her arms into the fitting slots, and the cube folded open. She set her chains for the bridge station.

It would be convenient if he has fallen asleep, I could refuse payment.

But as she approached, he alertly turned and rapidly reported: "We are being towed along a straight-line course. This has been maintained for three hours..."

"Our hours or theirs?"

"Ship time."

"I changed a timekeeper to their time system yesterday. Did that affect the ship's chronometer, or just my console?"

"Hours are hours, right? They seemed the usual length."

Typical man, not understanding the idea of unit conversions. "Go on."

"You received several non-urgent calls; I answered them."

"I'll get back to them once we're done here. Anything in particular I should know before then?"

"Yes. I have grave concerns about the net."

"In what respect?"

"It is against company policy."

"Our reassignment is permanent. Do you comprehend this?"

"Yes. We are employees of the Crimson Corporation, on contract to this outfit."

"They can disassemble this ship if they please, and you say they can't have us put up a safety net?"

He remained silent, but bit his lip a little.

"Think about it. Get some rest."

As he swung off, she checked the messages. One was from Wu, so she read it first. "We are having a comprehensive simulated battle at 1400. You are on gray team. See you then."

Then, from PorKoo: "Hello, Gray team! We're sure going to get vicious this afternoon, we have a great new teammate, Peeru. Everyone say hello! We're going to lick them hard! PS: frungy expo game this evening, 19:00 in the dome of the Vindicator's forward crew compartment."

Okay, that's just weird.

From Jay: "I have been looking forward to meeting you for weeks, even months. As the alignment of the stars indicates - not that we can see stars from here, or that alignment means much of anything here. Anyway - I can already see that your participation will be of great importance. So feel good, isn't it great to save the galaxy? Also, love is in your future."

These guys are worse than the Utwig.

From Snelopy: "Watch out with that gun, some of our team get insanely close to the enemy, and they are not well armored."

That's supposed to be hello?

From Tifiwilo: "Hello, young one."

Umm... get what you ordered, I guess.

She practiced a bit more in simulations against the Ur-quan. As she got hit once, she was set to thinking, and cancelled the simulation. Has this ship ever been hit by enemy fire? My skills here are no more important than their skills through the ship.

She pored through the library's copy of the Mauler handbook (which if printed would have been about her own mass) to check on procedures for damage control; she didn't even need to check the logs to determine that these had not been followed, even vaguely. In particular the cleanliness requirement. No need to have flying debris also be a problem in the event of a hull breach. She began to draft a set of directives, then checked herself. I don't need to take credit for this. It would in fact be better if I did not take the blame for making them do more work. How to arrange this?

One minute later, she had sent a message to the officers declaring that at the beginning of the watch after her next, she would inspect the ship, with special attention to the procedures in the damage control section of the handbook.

Okay, I wonder now what their other jobs are in the event of combat... Oh, this is not good at all. Half of these contradict the damage control directives. Crew are to be at posts well within the hull, crew are to be at posts along the hull. Keep tools out and prepared, keep tools secured with quick releases.

She quickly checked to see whether the message had been received -- yes, but only by the chief engineer. She quickly cancelled the message and called the chief engineer directly.

Kaandor was not on duty when I did my special modification, but she has not objected to the net. Logs showed her to be... competent.

Kaandor replied after a minute, confused. "Captain!"

"What do you think of the damage control procedures?" When the engineer hesitated, Peeru clarified, "I did not write them, and your comment will not get back to anyone who cares about the career of the author."

She relaxed. "Aside from a little bit of free sense, they're idealized to the point of uselessness. If you know exactly where you're going to be hit a minute or so in advance, they aren't so bad. If you don't, you're throwing your crew away."

"Has this ship ever taken damage?"

"Yes, but it has not been struck by enemy fire in forty years."

"So, what do you recommend?"

"The combat procedures, definitely. They were written by actual combat engineers, not the nano-credit-pinching accountants who wrote the damage control procedures."

"Wouldn't the accountants be worried about crew loss?"

That stymied them for a while. Wait! These procedures are over a hundred years old! That puts them before the crash. And it didn't occur to anyone to update them since then? Oh, wait. They're by someone who is now a vice-president. Would people be so craven as to not to want to contradict him, even under different circumstances? Or is it that replacing out-of-date documentation is not a promotion-worthy task? Probably just that.

"Never mind. Definitely follow the combat guidelines."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 5
Post by: Death 999 on March 11, 2008, 03:05:41 pm
Gray team gathered on one side of a simulated planetary system, alongside the Vindicator. As some members of gray team chattered about various subjects, Green team gathered at the other end.

"That's a lot of dreadnoughts." said Peeru.

Zelnick spoke up. "The six of us against them. Now. I'm the most obvious target. All of you have capacity to do tremendous damage if they ignore you..."

PorKoo put in, "And don't forget it!"

Zelnick continued, "So I'm going to try to get them to ignore you. Without getting myself blown up. And Peeru is going to help me."

Peeru gulped, but remained silent. It was fairly clear why the mauler would be suited to such duty, though.

Zelnick continued. "Snelopy, you stay on our side. Others: split up and head around to the rear. PorKoo, you command the harassers in the rear. Break!"

The harassers -- two skiffs, a stinger, and a fury -- zoomed off in their various directions.

Zelnick then spoke on a private channel with Peeru and Snelopy: "The Vindicator can go head to head against a dreadnought, but I can get mobbed. So, PorKoo will keep them from all facing us. Your job is to split up any formations that come at us. Just push back the second-nearest one, so I can take them one at a time. Wait for easy shots."

The harassers were already approaching their positions. The dreadnoughts stayed in close formation, an X. Two opposite ends of the X coordinated fire on one of the skiffs, while the center dreadnought, set back from their plane, covered them. The other two ends covered everything else.

Peeru said, "I see they don't trust their fighters to keep the others away."

"The cannons seem to be working. Very few fighters launched. No hits, but it's a matter of time. How about we edge closer and try to break it up? I can't go too near that formation, but you have retro-thrust and can get a bit closer. Try whacking one of them."

The three of them advanced.

Peeru selected one of the ends of the X and waited to come in range. The targeting system sure helps now that I know how to use it. Okay, steady... fire!

As her shots flew, she noticed orange flares growing ominously large. A moment later, a burst of two fusion blasts zoomed by the nose of her ship. An alarm went off as one from a different dreadnought struck. I didn't notice two others had turned to me! Too focused on aiming!

She zoomed past the Vindicator's stern before she thought to thrust. As it was, she was rattled enough to nearly miss Zelnick saying it was a good shot.

She checked that the dreadnoughts were not targeting her; they were not. But then she was surrounded by fighters. A whirl of fire flashed by. She fired madly to escape, but not before being tagged a few more times. The ship's batteries were uselessly low, and she was far from the battle and moving away. She thrusted inward again, but not hard, and surveyed the tactical situation a little more calmly.

There were four dreadnoughts, now three, as the Vindicator swept through the enemy formation. One of the skiffs had been destroyed, and all ships had taken light damage from fighters. And the dreadnoughts were chasing the Vindicator. They hit it multiple times, damaging it, but the harassers destroyed them before they could finish the job.

Without even waiting for the fighters to be mopped up, the simulation ended. Most captains became visible in their own panes, organized by team.

Where are the Arilou? This is not everyone. Only one of the three Spathi.

Zelnick said, "Wu."

Wu nodded. "I think green won this engagement. The Vindicator was mission-killed."

Zelnick acknowledged and said "Pkunky."

The Spathi captain replied, "If you hadn't charged suicidally, we probably would have wiped out the light craft in a few minutes. They have to get too close... If you had had cruisers, we could not have used a static formation."

Zelnick nodded. "I had wanted to avoid that matchup, but it does make a difference. Abrams, switch with Tinkafo next time. Abrams?"

"What Pkunky said. Also, this formation was highly specialized. We were worried the Arilou might pop in among us, rip a hole in our sides, and warp out."


PorKoo said, "The team fire made it dangerous to be around, and that middle ship kept me from rushing the rear. Until you blew it up. Then I blew up two of them in four seconds!"

"Why didn't you do what Abrams mentioned?"

"With all that defensive teleporting, they couldn't punch hard. And there was a fighter screen, a little. It was a good idea to focus fire on the Skiffs. If they had focused on me, I would have led them around. With the skiffs, they were aiming all over the place."

Wu said, "Or we would have destroyed you promptly. Your ship is not that maneuverable."

"Or that. Jay might have done better there."

"Well, we certainly weren't going to chase him if given the choice."

Zelnick asked, "How disruptive was the mauler? Fwiffo?"

Another Spathi captain appeared.

"Very." It disappeared again.

Jay said, "Having been stung, Fwiffo shed fighters as the meza flower sheds seeds when the greedy poot-worm stings it." The poetic tone subsided, and she continued, "I destroyed most of them, but not before they surrounded poor Peeru; and I nicked her too. My inner peace has not yet returned from recoiling at my error. I am in torment. I..."

Peeru cut in, "It was a simulation."

Zelnick asked Peeru, "Is your recoil always so severe and out of control?"

"No, I..."

The silence grew protracted.

Zelnick put forth a graphic and went on as if nothing had happened. "You could have fired twice, but you were out of range. If you hit once, this would have ended very differently. If you had begun thrust when Jay engaged the fighters, could you have been in range?"

I don't think he'd ask that if he didn't know the answer. "Yes."

"We'll take care of the fighters. Next time, be in range. Okay, let's take a ten minute break and then we'll do part 2."

Everyone disappeared.

What does he think now? Should I just tell him I'm no captain? I might be able to get a position managing resources. But their way of management seems to absurd, hardly managing at all.

Suddenly, Zelnick reappeared. "I am very sorry for putting you on the spot there. It was wrong. Others made errors, worse even, and I didn't go after them. Plus, it looks like you couldn't have it back for made that shot anyway."

Oh, that was a serious question?

"I've got something to tell you. You may not be surprised: I'm not really a captain."

"You are now."

"I'm an administrative assistant."

"So? I'm a computer guy. Wu's an aquaculturist. Abrams is an advertiser. They were lieutenants, but didn't see combat. Jay is a fortune teller. PorKoo is an explorer. The Arilou are the only captains here who fought in an actual war, and they normally hunt *Nnngn* and let them go. That's why we have these sessions. You aren't ready. I know.
"Enough. You need some time to get used to your new ship's capabilities. Be aware that these are approximate. We don't have too much practical data. Actually, scratch that. I'm making you an observer for this battle. You can still fly around as a ghost, get used to the ship's capabilities. But mainly watch the battle."

New ship?

Peeru examined her console, and shivered: her simulated ship was that of the civilization destroyers, the Kohr-Ah.

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 6
Post by: Death 999 on March 15, 2008, 02:47:37 am
This battle was completely different in character. The five marauders viciously attacked in a broad V formation, almost ignoring the skiffs and the eluders, the front three focusing fire on the Vindicator and the cruiser, the rear two laying down counterfire. Occasional plasma puffs blocked most of the rest of incoming fire.

The cruiser ended up flying directly away in a dead rout, while the Vindicator danced about at the limits of its range, mostly avoiding the blades and sneaking in a return shot here and there. One of the skiffs was abruptly destroyed by the plasma rings as it tried to break up the formation from the rear.

Was this what PorKoo referred to when speaking of licking them hard? This is not good. But the Vindicator is extremely agile. Despite its enormous size, it's not easy to hit, especially with such sluggish weaponry. On the other hand, those rear marauders are able to lay down an intense defensive screen for that forward one. The eluders are wasting their time going after the front of the formation, but from the rear they'd have problems with weapon range as the marauders accelerated away. A tricky problem.

After a time, the formation changed as the front marauder swapped places to its left. While that swap was being executed, the Vindicator came to closer range along the V's distorted left side and delivered a few shots. While plasma rings protected the marauders, they did not return much fire; and then the Vindicator was behind their formation, and it had already swung around behind the marauder on that left side. It let forth an intense stream of fire from its nose, pummeling the thrusters of the marauder in its sights. And just as quickly as it had attacked, it turned and faded away.

The V abandoned the crippled ship to the eluders, and continued its earlier tactic.

I'm not sure I understand this display. The ship is no longer accelerating significantly, but its systems panel doesn't indicate that degree of damage.

While they had been reduced by one, the effectiveness of their advance was only somewhat diminished: they sacrificed some of the defensive fire, but maintained the offense, dropping mines ahead of the Vindicator, always forcing it to maneuver, turn, avoid. Seems they're attempting to keep it away from the damaged ship. It's holding up fairly well, with those defensive mines.

But a hole appeared as one of the herding mines was laid improperly, and the Vindicator swooped through, and charged, blasters blazing. The crippled marauder had positioned its mines so as to be protected from the cruiser, which left it open on this side, so it limped forward among its mines; another shot landed.

Then as the Vindicator turned to avoid running into the mines, the marauder accelerated hard and released two plasma rings, which the Vindicator flew right through. And exploded.

Oh. It was faking. That explains it. That's not good.

A moment later, a few nukes made it through the depleted minefield and destroyed the marauder; but this barely caught Peeru's attention.

The simulation ended.

Zelnick started, saying, "Congratulations. Another mistake that won't be made in a real battle. Have tactics like that been seen in actual battles, PorKoo?"

"Yes. But those rings grew too fast and wide. It's not how they really act. If it hadn't been for that, you would have made it away free."

"We shouldn't count too much on what we think they can't do."

PorKoo continued, "But also, the rings weren't as good at defense. They let at least five hits through they shouldn't have. Some of them were important hits. You were wearing us down a lot faster than you should have."

Five examples popped up, one of a Vindicator blast, and four nuke hits, including two of the hits which had destroyed the bait marauder.

"All right. Any comments from our bait captain?"

Tinkafo spoke: "None about being the bait, as you put it. If we can lure them to release rings... inappropriately, that may be a powerful strategy. But it is risky. A skiff-stinger pair seems like a good team to... exploit this."

PorKoo puffed contentedly.

"Any other comments?"

Wu said, "The Yehat's shields would be invaluable here."

"Remember what happened last time we simulated a meeting going sour with them?"

"We have more ships now."

"And none that could do any better, unless it's the Mauler. Maybe its shots are fast enough to fake them out."

Wu continued, "Also, the Vindicator's weapons just lack the punch they need. If they could block a mine, you wouldn't have had to dodge as much, and may have gotten some more hits in."

Zelnick looked around. No one else had anything to add, so he said, "Dismissed."

Some of the captains disappeared.

Peeru sent a message to Zelnick, "What good is a question like that, wishing about weapons power?"

He replied, "We purchased the technology for the blasters from the Melnorme. Greenish may have more devastating weaponry for sale. Actually, we've assumed he does, though it is probably expensive."

"Nothing bought from the Melnorme is fairly priced."

"I get that feeling more from your people, actually."

Oops. I'll be quiet now.

He continued, publicly, "Peeru, train against Yehat, see how that goes. Tinkafo, be her trainer. By the way, I'm sorry, Wu, but I'm inserting the... 1038... into the rotation in your place. I know your crew will miss the frungy games."

"I certainly will; but I would have missed them had I attended in person anyway. And we're on tomorrow, right?"


Peeru asked, "Excuse me... what's the rotation being discussed here?"

Zelnick said, "The Vindicator is very spacious and well-equipped with luxuries, compared to the other ships. So two ships dock every evening, and the crews get a sort of mini-leave on board here. We have warm clothing for your crew, and little mobile chain frameworks like your lieutenant described, so you and your crew will feel right at home. We've even lowered the gravity a touch for the evening."

I wonder how much requirement there is for someone to stay on watch here while docked... hmm... looks like there is a company procedure saying there should be someone, but their list of duties is essentially busy-work. One watchholder.

"Is something wrong, captain?"

Yes; this is really messing around with the performance incentive structure. Well, we'll have to adapt. If I refuse, word will get around, and that net will kill me.

"What time should we be there?"

"As soon as we get you docked."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 7
Post by: Death 999 on March 17, 2008, 05:24:52 pm
As Zelnick had promised, the specifications had been filled precisely, and the crew was able to disembark neatly onto rolling hangers without activating the revolt suppression system. Each crew-member was joined by a human, who assisted with putting on the heavy clothing. Wugyup was playing with the controls, rolling back and forth, swinging higher and higher. He... I suppose Muugko will be a he... seems to have mastered the controls and adapted to the shorter chain length quickly! Is he really simple-minded, or just cheaply amused? And Nabek... how improper!  Letting that man touch her horns! Not even a real woman yet and already acting loose. Well, maybe it's just 'cultural exchange'. And wanting to be all grown-up, but not knowing what that is.

Peeru finally completed the transfer. On the other end of the loading bay, a load of mostly humans but also some Zoq, Fot, and Pik, were unloading from the stinger, which fit, barely, entirely into the chamber.

Then she noticed Zelnick approaching, holding the clothing the others were wearing now. Is he really doing this for me? Everything is upside-down. Bosses don't do this... unless...

"Welcome back, captain. Is it more comfortable with the chains?"

"Yes, much. How does that go on?"

The garment fit over her legs easily enough, and up around her arms with some more difficulty.

Finished, Zelnick said, "Tight as a button. Would you be more interested to watch the game, or tour the ship?"

"The ship, I suppose."

"All right. Spine first, or engines?"

"Your pick."

Zelnick led to a different way than the crew was being guided, to the corner, into a smaller room which closed off.

They began moving, and Peeru realized that the walls were transparent. They came out of the narrow shaft into a long room, full of engines, humming, bristling with charge.

Zelnick gestured wide. "Sometimes I come here and and just look at the engines. Reminds me of home."

Peeru nodded, then jolted. "What?"

"I spent most of my childhood inside a dead precursor factory. Those coils, the plate stacks... simply the patterns on the floor."

"You mean the 'warning, radiation' signs everywhere?"

He looked at her much more intently. "You know precursor?"

"What little we've deciphered, yes. What dose are we getting here?"

He pulled a green slip of plastic out of his sleeve, and returned it. "Can't be much. So, you really do have some artifacts, after all!"

"The Rosy sphere has been described to you..."

"Fifty credits says it's worthless."

"What do you mean?"

"A bet. If I'm wrong, I pay you fifty credits. If I'm right, you pay me."

"That sounds like an improper insurance policy, which is illegal for a good reason. Contracts should benefit all parties."

His face suddenly went sour. "Except the slaves you trade, and those fed to the furnace?"

"It is by contract that we are alive in the first place! I would call that a benefit."

Zelnick laughed. "I would too. Let's get back with our crews." He tapped a control and the lift zoomed off again.

Shortly, they came out in a wide-open room with an enormous bubble window opening right out onto the green of quasispace.

"What interesting sculptures!" So much more intricate than the wall-work even of a regional headquarters.

Zelnick seemed confused.

Not sculpture, then. "I'm sorry, they must be trees."

"Well, bushes, anyway. Close."

"Oh. Is that a lake?"

"It's a swimming pool. Have you really never seen a lake?"

"How would I have?"

Zelnick was left with no response.

A beep emanated from a piece on Zelnick's arm. "Zelnick here."

"Fenson. One of the Druuge hurt himself pretty badly. We're taking him to medical two."

"Coming. Do you have the necessary information?"

"I'm not sure."

As he set the lift again, Peeru put in, "I can give treatment authorization, as his immediate superior, whoever it is." I hope this is also included in their crew package. Of course it is.

"I meant the medical information."

I suppose they wouldn't have that, would they?

Zelnick continued, to Fenson, "What happened?"

"Something went wrong with the chains and he just fell to the ground. Broke his foot."

The room opened again. She followed Zelnick across a hallway, into a small - by precursor standards - room. Wugyup was lying on a shelf. With no chains. Maybe he wasn't so quick after all.

A doctor was conversing over a comm screen with Feres, trying to get her to help; Peeru went to the comm screen and told Feres to cooperate.

Another human approached Peeru and said, "Captains."

Zelnick replied, "Fenson."

Fenson asked Peeru, "After the chains dropped him, the other crew avoided him like the plague. Any idea why, captain?"

"Being dropped is usually death. We avoid that."

"Ah. So our mechanical error may cause social problems?"

"I think I can prevent it, if it's clearly just an error. Still, such a thing is an extreme breach of, well, how things work. But so is walking. Get him back in and everything will be okay again."

Wugyup then spoke. His voice was calm. "They won't take me."


"How do you think I got out? I said I'd like to join their labor union."

Peeru gasped. "Mind your mouth!" The audacity of it! The perfidy! The... genius!

She felt the alien gazes and the abominable man in front of her, and the dreadful likelihood that this was... a union ship. She maneuvered out into the hallway, away from the eyes, and began moving. The deck was not long, and she turned and faced a dead end. She just stopped and closed her eyes and imagined a place where the sky was black and the derivative of reward in respect to productivity was strictly positive and people didn't throw themselves into battles against immensely powerful aliens with thousands of years of experience at genocide. But that's not where I am, is it?

Someone approached. She opened her eyes. Zelnick. "The crew doesn't actually have a union. Or, if they do, they haven't told me about it."

"Please tell me that good performance is materially rewarded."

"Of course."

"And we're not all going to die."

"We'll win this, like a... Say, do you want to see how the rest of your crew is doing? They're at the frungy game."

"Of course."

She followed, and finished gathering herself. This dome was full of people, and some sort of action was proceeding in the center, which was zipping by too fast for her to be able to focus on it.

PorKoo was situated on a platform to the side, announcing excitedly. Peeru saw her crew's mobile chain platforms next to it, the legs extended high to give them a better view. One of the crew noticed her and alerted Muugko. He lowered himself and approached.

Zelnick said, "I guess that's it for the tour, for now. If you need anything, ask Raman, over there. I need to check in on other things." He returned the way they had come, as Muugko arrived.


"The amount of equipment required for this sport provides a significant..."

"About Wugyup. About the way the economics work here. What does the crew think?"

Muugko grew quiet. "After he fell we haven't asked any questions along those lines."

"What about before?"

"How about you review the recordings? The views expressed therein would not be representative of the Crimson Corporation or my own."

"Yes, I picked up on that. Can you summarize?"

"Captain, a man was dropped. Talking about that conversation... is unwise."

"Are you a shareholder?"

Defensively, "I have options. 'Get' options, of course."

Hmm. At the list price typically handed out on those options, he'd be far enough out of the money that the revolt suppression system would not consider him an owner.

"I'll listen. And if you have anything to suggest about new markets for sporting equipment, fill out an Opportunity Identification and Assessment form, paying special attention to field 12, part 7." That being the distance to the customer base. The Zoq-Fot-Pik would not make good trading partners unless for extremely high profit per mass.

"Submit to your marketing, technical, production, and immediate supervisors, each in triplicate, each copy made on a certified Verified Single Pass Entry Device."

"Those four recipients are all you. Do you want twelve copies?"

Foomp put me here, I'm sure not going to hand him a golden trade opportunity, if one exists. And I'm not going to justify his throwing me away, if there isn't one. "If you want this to be entered in the logs as your development, yes. If you just want a recommendation from your superior, no. If you realize that we're on permanent reassignment so that even if the trade world thinks you're CEO material you're still going to be a lieutenant..."

"Are you asking me to do less work?"

"The compensation packages offered by the Crimson Corporation are varied. The key to your success is understanding what will maximize them and lead to advancement." I figure the revolt suppression system can't object to citing the first page of the employee manual. Oh wait. I'm captain. Anyway... "At present time and for the foreseeable future, maximizing your compensation is principally determined by combat readiness, and in the event of combat, combat performance. Do you understand?"

"If this is a permanent reassignment, what room for advancement is there anyway?"

"Do you not see how there is room for advancement here? Say, do you... Is there someone back at the trade world you would want to meet again? Someone you had a reduced accommodations contract or something of the sort with?"

"Not a RAC, but a MEPTA." Ugh. Well, if he's the Mutual Exclusivity on Physicality Term Agreement type, I guess this works even better.

"In this outfit, I can see that you may be in a position, eventually, to buy a worker's contract. I'm talking Release To Subcontractor type."
Muugko's eyes darted as he attempted to comprehend the magnitude of what she had said. Good. At least he's back to being a productive employee.

"If you survive, and get the right connections. Now, go back and enjoy the game. Get to know these people better."
Peeru followed him back to the announcer's stand and raised herself up next to PorKoo.

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 8
Post by: Death 999 on March 17, 2008, 05:25:15 pm
"Ah, welcome, Peeru!"

Peeru turned to find herself face-to-face with something... green. With a feminine voice coming from its synthesizer.

"Have we met?"

"I'm KooPor, and this is KooPor." Two small tentacles gestured to her left: a brown being with a large eye sat motionless but for a sudden blink.

"It must be very confusing to have the same name."

"Not at all. Individually, I'm Koos, he's Porm, and ei's '."

"Ays what?"

Porm's game announcements had been, up to this point, a minor distraction. But now he called out something loud and unintelligible for several seconds.

When that had passed, Koos replied as if nothing had happened.  "More or less, yes."


"There's a name in there. We don't pronounce it. My full name now is my name-root, his name-root, and eir name-root, KooPor. The others rotate to put their name first. Make sense now?"

"So, you're sort of the captain's, wife... and something?" I hope I used that term right.

"No, not at all! We're married to KeeMow."

"Oh." Oops.

"We are different species, after all."

"I'd been wondering."

"And I wouldn't say I'm not the captain."

"Oh! I didn't see you in the simulations."

"There's a time limit on preparing. When we were both there, we argued until the sim started."

Porm leaned over and said, "Did not! We got the main plan down!"

"And we didn't get the contingency plan down."

"We would have if you hadn't... who-aah! And a score!" He was gone, sprung back to his spot.

Peeru noticed members of the Vindicator's crew attempting some sort of celebratory verbal-gesture combination which came across as a roar. A hanging variant was executed by some of her own crew. The roar died down after a few seconds.

"So, Peeru, are you married?"

"No. I used to have a Preliminary Investigation into Residential Reassessment, but his domestic negotiations were too aggressive. Now he says it ended because I wasn't feminine enough, the chromium-deficient egg-starver."

"Preliminary... why were you together? Were you near-grown?"

"We met in school, taking Burvixese and calculus. He was male, and it was clear I'd be female. I was impressed with his persistence in trying to understand limits, since that didn't come easily to him. I thought it was a good sign for the future. Hence the PIRR. Then the crash hit and housing got cheap, so there was no point in my yielding to his undiminished demands. Our differences grew, and neither of us exercised the testing clause any further. So, how did you meet, ah, who was it?"

Koos wriggled. "It was ', actually. Keepi and Mowowa were helping ' up the ramp to the enfractory, when ' slipped. ' stopped eir slide. Keepi almost blew spores, she was so upset with herself. Then Mowowa offered us a dinner in thanks. And that was such a good day that we had to return the favor next freeday. And that was such a good day, that they had to in return, and so on. We don't have anything formal like you, or even like the humans, but if we did, we would immediately." Yes, it seems like a continuing reciprocal relationship which is understood in practice if never codified. Man kinds of things.

"Oh! That reminds me." Koos wriggled a little, and made a small gesture with one of its apparently useless tentacles. A hovering plate floated over. There is clearly some expectation here. I don't understand.

Koos clarified, "Prepared under my direction. Would you like some?"


"'For', what?"

"That's what I asked, yes."

"But I didn't even say 'for'!"


"Would you like some of the contents of this plate?"

"In exchange for what?"


"Is this on the ship's ration..."

"No. Take it. My compliments."

A loss leader, perhaps? I will be immune to such weak persuasive tactics, surely, but the consumer-level crew I have may be swayed. Peeru looked across to those of her crew arrayed to her side, but could not immediately determine the origin of their foods. Well, if it's a loss leader setup here, at least I'll be able to give them a talk before they are drawn in irrevocably. On the other hand, should I? Protecting oneself from advertising is a high-level skill, reserved for owners and off-world representatives. On the other hand, these crew are off-world representatives. Yes, I should ask about it.

"I'll take that as a 'no'." Koos seems disappointed!

"Oh, yes, I'll have some, I was just..." She trailed off, trying to think up an excuse.

"Ah, yes. In some regions we symbolically look for wheels before biting off a clinger, I understand if you do the same."

I have no idea what that was about, but it seems to have satisfied her.

Peeru took one of the pieces at random.

Koos added, "I even reversed the chirality in the sugars for you. It's safe."

I hadn't even thought of that! I should have.

Peeru ate it. It was weakly sweet, though it had an interesting texture. Including a small stone in the center. At least, I think it's a stone.

After some time of attempting to break it up, Peeru gave up and spit it into her palm. It was, indeed, a stone.

"That goes in the empty dish, there."

She seems expectant. I see there was something she wanted, after all! Perhaps this was a beta test?

"Good overall..."

"Oh, thank you so much. So, Jay and I were talking about the aura surrounding your homeworld."

Porm suddenly shouted out a jubilant announcement.



Porm shouted out some more, concluding, "And so the royals have done it again! Seventeen and three fifty-sixths to fifteen and an underwhittle! Why don't we all give a hoot to both sides' defensive intercalators, who made this game so exciting? Very tight control!"
The crowd replied appropriately, and began to disperse.

"Captain Peeru?"

Peeru looked down to a human. After a moment, she remembered Zelnick had indicated this one. She lowered herself. "Yes?"

"Message from the captain. You will not have a replacement for Wugyup before we resolve the situation with the current portal, due to re-training time considerations."

Already trying to short my allocations? Or is it for the reasons stated?


"Also, due to said portal, you are to gather your crew and return to your vessel, and rest up, to be ready for passage and possible combat at 0626."

"What time is it now?"


Title: Peeru Fanfic part 9
Post by: Death 999 on March 17, 2008, 05:35:26 pm
Peeru tried to sleep, but visions of Ur-Quan fusion blasts striking the ship taunted her, and she couldn't quite dismiss the urge to get in more practice. The only on-duty person was the navigator, and she had given her permission to sleep, merely being ready to handle any emergency conditions that might arise.

The sleep bubble's console indicated a call incoming. Peeru checked the sender - Jay. Well, I might as well take it. I'm not getting any sleep.

The over-sized beak bobbed excitedly. "Captain, I just had a most portentious dream. And whom do you guess it concerned? Oh, you're right, it was you! And what sort of dream was it? I did not see the things I saw about your world, the smoke-tubes like poot-worms with intestinal distress. I saw love. Yes, love, that same I saw earlier, in bright contrast against its absence in your past. Where we pass through this portal, that is where you are going to meet your love. Or realize you had it already. Or discovered it again, as you find your favorite missing grooming stick tangled in your tail? Or..."

"Jay, why don't you go back to sleep and get that straightened out."

"Yes, of course, I should return to the dream realm and plumb its depths with my most meditative somnolence."

"Of course you should."

After that, oddly, Peeru had no trouble getting to sleep.


Everyone was rested.

The reddish portal grew from a microscopic dot to a substantial fraction of the sky.

Red alerts sounded.

Battle contingencies were made.

And they were through. The ships spun about, passing through the eddy, dropping into hyperspace.

Ten seconds later, a portal back to quasispace formed, and the ships spun up into it again.


"So, I'm going to find love in the middle of Ur-Quan space, am I?"

"Odd though it may seem, yes."

"I'll keep that in mind."

Her connection was cut off. At first, there was no connection. Then, Zelnick appeared. "Captain. Please meet me immediately. As you did the first time." The connection cut off; Peeru did not try to reopen it.

In my resting cube? What? Why? This cannot have the significance to him that it would have to us.
But Peeru made the arrangements. An eerie sensation that Jay had been referring to this crept over her, and though she dismissed it, she found herself calling the pkunk captain.

"Jay, can you clarify something?"

"The web of fate is foggy..."

"Has that event you foretold already happened?"

Jay froze, sensing her distress. After a pause long enough to have accommodated his usual conversational indirections, "No?"

"Thank you."

Peeru closed the connection, and headed to her cube. As the ships docked, she got into it, the chains releasing her limbs once she was inside. Momentarily, she was conveyed to the cargo bay of the Vindicator.

The Captain again greeted her, alone, catching the cube and slowing it with his mass, unlocking it in midair.

He seems tense. Why?

He offered her the same coat she had been in the previous evening, and slowly had the gravity turned on, just a little.

Why does he not speak or meet my eyes? He did before.

Peeru maintained the silence as she put on the coat, and followed the Captain up the corridor, pushing with her feet and hands as needed against the floor and walls. Zelnick caught her final oversized step and drew her to the seat she had been in before. He seated himself facing her, and stared at one of his computer screens that she could not see, for a minute.

Ah, making me wait, emphasizing his importance?

He tersely said, "What do you think of this uniform design?"

A design appeared on a screen facing her. It appeared similar to the one she wore, though bearing the same patterns as Wu and the officers on the Vindicator wore: white cuffs, with gold accents. She looked up to see him staring intently at her.

"I do not have a strong opinion on it."

"Try it out. It's on my dresser." He gestured to one side, to what would have been a precursor closet, or perhaps even a locker.

Peeru hesitantly went, feeling his gaze follow her. This is more than a little strange.

The room was small, and decorated only by a padded shelf with its own local gravity, on which were placed a few knicknacks - some of them clearly of Pkunk origin, and shiny rocks. And an egg. The rest was a rectangular palette with cloth on it, and a machine from which was hanging the uniform Zelnick had just indicated.

She sealed the room, and examined the uniform. It was the same consistency of material as her own, a touch darker red. They had also included the utility features of her own uniform: the interior recirculator, the sleeve comm unit, the same system of straps.

This is bizarre. The entire situation. Very sketchy.

Once she had made up her mind to do it, she changed in a few seconds.

Interesting. They copied Wugyup's: the belly parts are more suited to a male. But anyway, he hasn't burst in... I guess he wasn't up to anything after all.

She opened the door, and Zelnick was right outside.

What's that he's holding toward me? It looks a bit like a weapon. Okay, it's not too late for him to be up to something.

She backed up. He entered, grabbed her old uniform, and threw it far out into the bridge.

Oh, I knew it! I just had this bad feeling, and here we go. Well, he'll feel my horns in a moment. The moment I get up the courage. Any moment now.

He sealed the door behind him, and checked a little more with what he was holding. "Okay, captain. You're bug free now." He dropped what he had been holding.

Oh. That's not a weapon, that's a sensor! "What?"

"Your uniform had monitoring devices all through it. I could not speak with you freely."

"But who would be receiving these signals except me, the captain?"

"You tell me. One second after we arrived in Hyperspace, your ship oriented towards the Tradeworld and emitted an extremely powerful but extremely narrow-beam hyperwave signal using as an antenna its entire hull, and somehow even using some of the Vindicator's tractor field as well. This clearly violated my orders for communications blackout. It may have permanently ruined our ability to use that portal without having a welcoming committee.

"I was led to wonder why your ship would be reporting to the tradeworld in the first place. So I looked over the purchase contract, and your contract to me, and your general contract. And I asked a few questions of the crew who had guided your crew."
Peeru's previous fears that he was up to some sensual purpose now seemed pale compared to the enormous wrenching fear which took her.

"Peeru. You are still an employee of the Crimson Corporation. Is this correct?"


"I am your immediate superior. Is this correct?"


"As such, I have personnel management authority. Is this correct?"

The fear exploded. She was unable to respond.

"Well, it is. You're fired. Now, would you like a job?"

She re-listened to that last part several times in her mind before she managed to say, "What?"

"I would like to hire you to be captain on this Mauler starship I happen to have, which lacks a captain."

"But..." Way to start contract negotiations, saying I'm unqualified. "... I don't see that you have appropriate compensation packages, especially considering the hazard involved."

"One hundred kilos of silver per day, baseline. Here's the figure in your units."

That's about twice times my present salary. I mean, my old salary. I mean, my old old salary. Under Foomp. "Non-consumed metals? They're not valuable. Make it a ton of Uranium, reactor grade or higher."

"A ton? You must be joking."

"I've seen the logs of your mining practices. If I'm on board, really on board, I'll optimize them so you'll be profiting kilotons. A ton per day is a steal."
He shrugged. "Okay. One ton of uranium per day, baseline. Agreed?"

Peeru thought. "If we win, I want a moon. One that isn't a joke."

"Thinking big? All right. If we win and you have performed with excellence, you pick, against my veto, an eighth of a moon in the Crateris or Crucis constellations."

"Where?... that's where we just were! It's in the middle of Ur-Quan space!"

"If we've won, it won't be."

"I wasn't complaining, it's just..." Jay's prediction suddenly seems much more likely. What am I thinking?


"Who determines excellence?"

"If anyone has to ask, you don't get it. You asked for a moon, you set the bar high. Do you agree?"

Peeru cleared her head. I can do this. Two shares of Crimson Corporation stock versus an eighth of an auric world. Hmm. And if I don't, what then? Let's not even go there.


"Now, really welcome to the Alliance of Free Stars, captain!"

"Thank you."

"Your first job is to clean your ship up so when we come out of quasispace it doesn't blast a signal halfway across the galaxy."

"Yes, sir."

"This takes priority over combat training. We cannot leave quasispace until this has been resolved."


"Then, you are to firm up our information defenses. You, and for that matter, the Melnorme, were able to scan our computers. I do not want to rely on the Ur-Quan not being able to do this."

"I will do what I can, but it is not my field." Kind of. I know how to get through, but not how to stop others' doing the same.

"Lastly, I read here that even after you're fired, this section 15 NDA thing still applies. Are you going to follow that?"

"Of course. It is a contract."

"So you won't share that information, such as locations of trading partners, even though this information could save all non-Ur-Quan sentient life in the galaxy? Well, if you ever have any suggestions on which direction we might head for some... completely unrelated reason, just let me know."

"I understand." I will have to think about this.

"Remember not to mention that you are no longer with the crimson corporation where its bugs can hear." He opened the door. "On other subjects, we have a volunteer to complete your crew complement, and we can send a few supernumerary engineers, if you need the help."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 10
Post by: Death 999 on March 18, 2008, 06:05:21 pm
Peeru gave Kaandor free reign to devise and implement the most reliable solution to disable the high-power broadcast system, and instructed her to report every hour.

For her own part, Peeru stayed in the Vindicator with Zelnick. They were joined by a team of Alliance software engineers: Simpson, a wrinkly, almost skeletally thin (even thinner than Zelnick) brown human man; Hayt, a short, fat, pale human man with long tied black hair; and Tippy, a Pkunk - the first she had seen, so she couldn't compare sizes or tell he was also a man until the humans used that pronoun with no objection - colored orange and yellow, with a smattering of black feathers.

It was quite an effort for her to patch the holes without violating the NDA. As it worked out, she'd point out an element of their system, mention a principle, and they'd guess what she meant.

This worked all right whenever it was something like sanitizing a string argument to a parser. Zelnick, familiar with the workings of the system, would figure out what the vulnerable spot was, and Hayt or Simpson, more formally trained, would make notes towards a patch.

But then things got a little more obscure. It took a few minutes for her hints to point them towards spoofed internal communications with pulsed lasers.

As time went on and the harder-to-describe holes came up, it was Tippy who figured her vague gestures and hints out. Part of this was simply because Hayt had given up trying to understand what she was saying and was poking around looking for vulnerabilities himself.

And then they moved on to the two methods developed after Peeru had advanced to her elevated position. Of these, she had only read their executive summaries, and had never used them herself, only supervised their application.

When Tippy figured out what she was getting at anyway, she stopped the proceedings. "Tippy, are you psychic?"

"No, ma'am."

"Then how did you know that? I didn't know that!"

Hayt looked up from his console. "I don't know how you get anything out of her at all. This is stupid."

"It's principled."

"Giving us the info we need, but pulling our teeth out doing it?"

"Not violating contract is serious."

Zelnick gestured for Hayt to stop, and he did. "Tippy, enlighten us."

"Who have I coded for all my life? Mystics and seers and seekers of higher planes."

Simpson chuckled. "So if you can even figure out their use-cases, this should be child's play?"

"Quite. We've only been at this for four hours. Around now is when I'd be expecting my client to say what the software is actually supposed to do in this life as opposed to the one after next."

Peeru suddenly remembered to check her progress reports.

A moment later, she said, "I am pleased to announce that the 1038 won't be making any more high-powered transmissions. They put a full-manual switch on its power supply. Hrm."

"... but...", Zelnick said.

"We don't have hyperspace engines while it's off. Well, we're being towed everywhere anyway, it shouldn't be a problem."


When they next emerged from quasispace, the red alert sirens turned yellow, then disappeared.

Zelnick called: "So, mining advisor? Which way do you recommend?"

"Give me a minute..." Our prospectors found a lot of radioactive material in Beta Leporis, and they rate that highly. But of course he doesn't really want mining advice, he wants to know about the Supox and Utwig, who are right here. Plus, that uses information not available under my NDA. Taking that out of consideration, the choice is clear.

"The Hyades cluster is dense. Start with Delta Hyades."

"Really, skip the nearer Librae?"

"When was the last time you found anything worthwhile around a white dwarf? You can't just take the nearest thing."

"Well, there's another thing. My main purpose for the moment is to find out where these portals go. After we hit yours, it was quite clear that there is no pattern. So, do you think that this area is at least as good as average, or should we just take another exploratory jump?"

"Wait a moment. Wouldn't the Arilou tell you where they go?"

"They said something cryptic like finding out would be better than knowing."

"Sounds like they know, and they want you to explore."


"Have you found any portals that led to nothing?"

"Well, the last one - before yours, I mean - was kind of the middle of nowhere. All we got out of it was the biggest meanest monster I've ever seen. I don't know if that's of cosmic significance, but Greenish will probably pay quite a bit for a look at it. So, should we stick around?"


"All right. And anyway,  there's still the possibility they dump us somewhere random each time. So I ought to at least get something done on the way. All right, course set, we're off! Now, have you arranged for training with Tinkafo?"

"I received a message, it'll be in just a few minutes."

"All right. Good luck. Don't forget to include your crew in some exercises, once you're up to speed." She acknowledged; he closed the connection.

Of course. I had been excluding them so as to hide my inexperience, but I'm not horrible now. I could use the help. Having a distinct gunner would actually have helped significantly in that mass battle. I wonder whether the others had assistants?

Peeru issued a notice to Muugko and the gunner, notifying them of the next mock battle that evening.

No need to include them in this little exercise: from the way they were talking this up before, this enemy is very tough: bad place to start.
She practiced her targeting for a while, and at the agreed time, opened the connection.

Tinkafo sat before her, in virtual open vacuum, floating.

"Hello, young one."


"Join me before we start. Discard your ship."

How... okay.

She hung in front of him.

"Discard the reality of your body. You are still hanging."

"This would be a lot more effective if my interface were immersive."

He didn't acknowledge her complaint. Eventually, as she relaxed, her tunnel vision to the screens become more profound, and the interface became effectively immersive.

"You fear death, battle."


"Neither is your greatest fear."

"Powerlessness." Peeru recalled how her motivation supervisor had identified that fear, instructed her to harness it. She focused on that excercise.

"Discard it."

"What?" In confusion, she became situationally aware again.

"Fostering a fear, any fear, holds you back."

Peeru considered this, providing against it the arguments of her motivation supervisor.

Tinkafo bowed his head a little. "Think on this, later."

He receded into the distance. Peeru restored her presence to being that of her ship.

In one sense, the practice went poorly. Tinkafo was flying the Yehat Terminator, and he blocked very well.

However, she managed the battle well on the larger scale, not wasting ammunition, and at least making a passable attempt at luring the Terminator into shielding inappropriately.

It didn't work until she used her ship as bait, and he drained his battery in autocannons in her direction. Several hits landed on each side, with a net balance in his favor. But it was clear how that could have gone differently.

In this case, avoiding a fear of getting hit makes sense. But I can't quite understand how giving up my fear of powerlessness would help in any way.

In the end, neither ship had been destroyed even once, and Tinkafo called the session to a close.


The new crewmember transferred from the Starrunner; Peeru stood by with Kaandor to greet their new addition -  a human male, she knew from what information had been sent her, with a specialty in alien technology.

The hatch opened at the other end of the umbilical. He was big, with the largest head, chest, and arms she had seen; but as he rotated, she saw he had no legs. As he came closer, she saw he was already somehow in a chain system like those they had used on the precursor vessel, though with the knee chains attached to the bottom of his torso.

The chains stopped at the end of the passage; he saluted. "Specialist Martin Ndeki, Junior, reporting for duty."

A moment passed.

"What are you reporting, for duty?"

"I mean, I am here and under your command."

"I see. How are you controlling those chains, if you haven't got fingers in your knees?"

"I normally wear a leg prosthesis. We reprogrammed it to control the chains."

"Does that work?"

"It's hard to blind type with my feet, but I can get around all right."

A message arrived from Kaandor: "I don't need another man to replace Wugyup! He was a dead weight."

Peeru said, out loud, "I feel I should warn you that among the Druuge, men have difficulty with engineering and mathematics. So, you may find some who are dubious of your abilities."

Kaandor pointedly asked, "What does a specialization in alien technology even mean? A specialization in human technology would be much narrower."

"Learning how other people solve the same problems has its own value."

"And any ordinary engineer can do that."

"Also, the specialization is in interface, allowing members of one species to use equipment intended for another."

"Excellent! Having you here will allow us the benefit of having you here."

Peeru cut in. "And I expect that benefit to be substantial."

Kaandor barged on ahead. "And with those enormous monitors, how are you going to get any work done?"

Martin just folded them to the side.

"And if a message comes in? You won't even be able to see it."

"I may not have your telescopic eyes, but that does mean my peripheral vision never goes away."

Peeru realized this back and forth had to stop. She sent a message to Kaandor: "Measure, then decide. Leave snap decisions to the guys. If we ever need another human, we'll be glad we had him first. Now get down there and figure out how we can get hyperspace back."

They went, but Kaandor gave a concerned look back up to Peeru as they descended.

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 11
Post by: Death 999 on March 18, 2008, 06:05:51 pm
It was later that watch when the yellow alert siren went off.

The alert read, "Sensor contact, likely probe."

A minute later, Zelnick called her, in a hurry. "We have three hours to contact. Review how these battles have gone for a few minutes, then we're going to have a full fleet review exercise, then we'll rest, and return to alert. We have these things down pretty well, don't worry. When it priority overrides, just stay close but out of our way, don't try to hit it. We don't need your help to win, and we don't want you to break formation and lose you. Get your people ready."

The bridge crew were all present and ready; Peeru called down to Kaandor as she reviewed a digest summary of the previous encounters. "Are you ready down there?"

"The kids are nervous. Who is it?"

"Looks like a robot, extremely fast, and a pathological liar. Looking at the last few times... twice it fell to concentrated fire without doing damage; once it managed to do light damage to one of the Spathi."

"So, not too dangerous?"

"Looking further back... they were, but not now."

"Good. You hear that, girls?"

Momentarily, the exercises began. The first went straightforwardly - the probe was trapped by nukes at range, limped towards them, and was finished off by a spray of blaster fire.

The second time, the probe managed to dodge the nukes several times on the way in, dashed all the way around the Eluders' torpedo screen, loop-de-looped through a gap in the Vindicator's blaster stream, and... pause.

While everyone was still adapting to the eerily frozen fire, Zelnick said, "1038, my orders to hold fire did not apply to this simulation."

Peeru acknowledged.

"We'll back up five seconds and resume with history locked in place, for context. Ready... go."

The previous five seconds replayed.

Genlo, the gunner, tracked, and as soon as they were live, he fired twice - misses.

Peeru opened the thrust all the way to get them back in place. "What are you doing? Hold fire!"

He turned around and up to her. "But he said..." And now we do have an opportunity...

"Fire!" Peeru jammed the control herself, seeing he wasn't ready anymore; but it was too late, the probe was no longer headed straight down their barrel, and they missed.

To Muugko, she said, "Get us back in position."

She monitored the progress of the battle and checked whether they were dangerously exposed.

They would have been, but the battle was over in a moment - light damage to one of the stingers was the only loss.

All that and we didn't even lose anything of consequence? It seemed like such a catastrophe while it was happening!

"Genlo, he only gave us permission to fire when appropriate. I decide that."

He acknowledged, and the third round was upon them.

The probe led the tracking nukes on a merry chase, but then it got overly focused on avoiding the torpedo screen. It left itself wide open for several seconds, as it wove back and forth without really getting anywhere. Even in the middle of that, it managed to dodge one of two nukes.

"Fire! Repeat!"

Genlo shot twice, and hit once.


Muugko scrambled to get them back in place, but again, the battle was over before he could. "What was it doing?" he wondered out loud

"Really. It just sat there." Genlo added.

Zelnick addressed the fleet. "Nice shooting, 1038! We've all - except our new additions - seen them do that. We don't know why, but now when they do it, we know it's all over. I think we've got this about wrapped up. Take a nap if you can, stay sharp."


Ten minutes before contact, they went to red alert. Nervousness was palpable in everyone in the control center.

Five minutes before contact, Zelnick addressed the fleet. "Folks, we have two probes in this group. I'll try to arrange so we face them one at a time, but it might not work. Skiffs and Fury, try to draw the second one aside. Like the old days, right, Jay?"

Jay replied, "Like Gamma Centauri." That was the first one they did with no casualties? Right.

Zelnick contacted the rear probe, staying on the line with the fleet.


Zelnick shouted out, "Prepare to be annihilated!"

That probe, and only that probe, abruptly reversed course and responded, "DEFENSE SYSTEM HAS BEEN ENGAGED. HOSTILITIES COMMENCE."


"Well, that put an extra four or five seconds between them. Ready, everyone?"

Jay floated a ways below the Vindicator, ready to swoop up and distract; the Spathi spread out in an array found most likely to cause those moments of confusion; and the rest huddled close.

And it began. The opening nuke volley had the unfortunate effect of chasing it away for a moment, and then both of them were coming at once.

Jay charged in and got both probes on his tail.

"Fire! Re-form!"

The aim was true, but the probe dodged. That put it enough behind Jay that it changed focus back to the main group, and charged.

The torpedo screen made it retreat, but didn't confuse it.

How's Jay doing out there? Looks like that remaining probe is gradually catching up, and no one else is aimed back there.

Peeru swung the 1038 to the side to face the Golden Teachings of Inner Peace - Jay's ship, and 'Gold' for short - just as it tried to shake its pursuer with a whirl of fire; but the probe stuck with the pursuit.

She got on the line with him.

"Idiotic vermin! One-track unbalanced yang worshipper!" Jay hissed and hooted.

"Jay! Fly straight!" Then the probe will fly straight and we can hit it.

"Coming!" the Gold swung straight at the 1038; the abrupt turn let the probe catch up.

An arc of the probe's lightning caught it and latched on.

The two hurtled closer and closer, but no clear shot presented itself - the Gold was still bobbing and weaving. Can it stop doing that? Maybe not!

The arc intensified, and the comm line went black.

"Fire! Repeat! Repeat! Repeat!"

Where the two ships had been was an incandescent globe of plasma.

The 1038 shot backwards out the side of the formation.

They passed the debris cloud that had been the other probe.

The Gold hadn't been destroyed until I fired. I just... Peeru numbly issued the order, "Re-form."

After a moment, Muugko opened the throttle, and they slowed.

Zelnick shouted, "New contact, close at 9+4!" Vindicator's left, and sharply up.

Peeru looked along that line, and gasped. A fury had arrived and was charging.

A spathi cried out, "Ghost ship!", and the Eluders broke formation.

Her heart raced as the Fury turned its charge directly at her. Vengeance?

The fleet channel was filled with a long trill. "Prrrrrreeee! Nope, no ghosts!"

The Fury rammed the 1038 right on the center axis. The ships bounced apart, but the low-level force fields and inertia alignment fields attenuated a catastrophe into a jolt and rocking of the chains. Over the ship-to-ship line came, "Kisses! Whee! Papa Ganjak says he's proud!" But by the time Peeru had brought that video stream to front, it was black again.


The Fury went around the fleet bumping into the Stinger, then one of the Cruisers, then wedging itself in the Vindicator's struts for a moment before backing off and calming down. The fleet channel was cacophonous.

Zelnick finally silenced the chatter and announced, "Okay, folks, this is Jay! Looks like they had some kind of quick emergency warp or something."

Or something. This fury isn't damaged anywhere, and the Gold was nearly torn apart.

He went on, "No rush, but let's get back on the road. Fwiffo, that means turn around and get back over here. Good. Jay, why don't you tell us what happened?"

"We're not done here, so the great worm Azikarahanumanalanu got indigestion and burped us back up, and here we are!"

"Umm. And it burped up the Gold, too?"

"Nope! Fresh plucked from celestial armory by the jade reed-bird Vireek, this is the Harmonious Bearer of Fortune."

"Huh. Well, looks like we're all together again. Stand down from all alerts."

The ship felt quiet, though the engines continued their throb.

They are there, against all reason, no thanks to me. I distracted Jay, then shot the Gold. Genlo knows it too, and I think Muugko does. I doubt the others do. And I disobeyed orders.

A private call came in from Zelnick. With dread, Peeru opened it up.

Zelnick was biting his lip. What does that mean?

"So, how do you feel after your first fight?"

Peeru wasn't expecting that. She couldn't think of anything to say. I know how I feel about what I did - bad - but now I don't think he's mad, so I can stop being scared. And I'm in awe of what just happened to Jay and Tippy.


"So's everyone else."

"I apologize for not holding fire as you ordered."

He waved that aside dismissively. "I'd rather you take the initiative than stand by as the Gold got chewed up. Be very thankful to the worm of the dead, though."

"I will avoid shooting through allied ships in the future."

"You do that."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 12
Post by: Death 999 on August 12, 2008, 08:05:56 pm
After closing the connection to Zelnick, Peeru tried and failed to call Jay. Of course he was a little busy, and she could not connect. Then she called Tippy.

Being on duty and on alert, he was unable to answer, but this time she let herself get herded into leaving a message. She couldn't think of what to say, so she just left it blank. The protocol for such a message is not something I was ever taught, nor could it. Congratulations on not being dead anymore, I hope you didn't mind my shooting you, and I would like to know what being dead was like?

Muugko signaled for her attention. She acknowledged.

"Do you recall the message we received as we collided?"

"Roughly. So-and-so was proud?"

"Papa Ganjak. Down in engineering, Heeran has a father whose name is Ganjak." Does Muugko memorize the personnel files, did he look them up, or does he know Heeran better than one would expect given Muugko's on-shore MEPTA? "At least, according to Trifop. It comes up as Goonac in the personnel files. Chalk it up to coincidence?"

"More like someone changed their name."

"Why, captain?"

"Back during the eastern revolt, one of the union leaders was named Ganjak. Getting off that association would be worth it, and it would be a good opportunity to westernize their name as well. Hence Goonac. You're probably too young to remember that. Fersu, Lumne, Ganjak, and Plors."

Muugko was looking about in alarm, and Peeru paused the history lesson. He messaged her, "All the other bridge officers are eastern, remember?"

Peeru looked around and saw only people hard at work. Doing what, precisely? Listening in and getting offended? No need to stir that up. But yes, perhaps those are somewhat strained faces.

Peeru continued, "Well, I don't really know what happened back then. So, is Heeran's father deceased?"

"Not as far as we know."

"Ah. Confirmation bias at work after all?"

Muugko didn't seem to know what she was referring to, so she dropped it.

"Muugko, I am going to be taking on some administrative duties in the fleet. Are you prepared to run the ship on a temporary basis while I devote myself to these projects?"

"Am I prepared to be captain?" He was way too excited.

"Are you prepared to be commander?"

"Yes. You are the first captain I've served who has assumed any duties other than loose oversight and a watch."

Is that so? We'll see whether things change around here.


A few hours later, Peeru was up to the neck in planning their mining. To better oversee operations, she transferred to the Vindicator. A close inspection of the two landers and discussion with their three chiefs helped her revise her overall strategy; and then they were in orbit.

The next week was a blur as Peeru let conceptual tunnel-vision take hold. She was aware that she had received a response from Tippy, and that Muugko had notified her of some discipline problem, and that contact had been made with the Utwig, but she merely noted them and moved on without thinking of them further. She was fully aware that a fourth lander crew was being formed so the workers could physically keep pace with her, and she was careful to give them the easier assignments. She was a machine for figuring out what the right questions were to ask the computer - how to minimize risk this time, how to fill the storage compartments just right this time, and so forth.

And then the main cargo bays were full. She took a nap.


Peeru woke in an unfamiliar room. The light was dim, but she could make out the soft pallet she lay on, and the other three in the room; one was above her. The gravity was low enough that she could walk. The air was comfortable, if stained with unfamiliar odors, and a bit damp.

She got up, and the lights came on. She was still wearing her uniform, wrinkled and dirty.

She identified the door and stepped out. A young crewmember was sitting against the wall just outside the door; she (Peeru correctly suspected it was female) leapt to her feet and held her hand to her head. "Captain!"

Peeru looked at where she was pointing, but there was nothing there. The crewmember snapped her arm down.

It took a moment for Peeru to remember how to speak in English. "Ah, who are you and where am I?" I am not at my best. With resting cube one always wakes to familiar environs.

"Spacer Bihouta. This is forward crew compartment, section 1f. We moved you to these quarters from where you fell asleep."

"Ah, where did I fall asleep?"

"The captain's bed."


"If you would like to wash up, I can guide you through the facilities, or you can return to your ship. Before you do, you should be aware of certain developments."

"We met the Utwig."

"Not that. Ten of your crew quit."

"What?" Wugyup's poisonous behavior was not punished enough. How could I have failed so? How could I trust Muugko with this? "Well, who's left?"

"Lieuteant Muugko, chief Heeran, and specialist Ndeki."

"Where are the others?"

"Assigned, for the moment, to the Vindicator. Several have asked to speak with you."

"Really? I... guess I'll hear them, then."

Bihouta led Peeru to her chain system. "We will need to pass through high gravity areas."

Peeru placed her arms in, and they accepted her. She set the device to follow her guide, and she checked her messages in greater detail. Tippy's message was still first, and she ignored it. Bulletins of practices... discipline issues.

Hmm. Trifop and Kaandor spreading subversion. Feres playing on watch. Genlo disobeying orders in combat, insolence? There hasn't been combat. Vaando, sabotage? Nabek, communicating socially with a known union agitator? What happened here?

Peeru became aware that they had stopped in a small room with a... table. As she was situating herself, Bihouta stepped back outside, and Wugyup walked in. He pulled out a chair and plopped himself down in it. He said, in English, "I heard you did a bang-up job on that mining, administrative assistant Peeru." She took a moment to translate the title. "Oh, did I let that slip? It's our secret." How did he find that out?

"What did you do to my crew, Wugyup?"

He gestured 'nothing'. Genlo glided in. "Wugyup, get out of here. You didn't have anything to do with this, and I don't want to see your filthy face if I can avoid it."

But Kaandor was right behind him. "Oh, no. He stays."

The room filled up with the chain frameworks it was not intended to accommodate, as the rest of the bridge crew filed in.

Trifop took the lead. "Captain, Lieutenant Muugko is crazy and stupid. He's been imagining charges to level against us because he doesn't like the... laxity in this fleet, or the permanence of our reassignment, or something."

Wugyup put in, "He did that before, too, when he could get away with it. Nothing new."

Genlo added, "More to the point, he's dangerously ignorant of tactics, and his ego gets in the way of fixing that. I devised a way to actually hit those stealthy buggers, and he punished me for giving it a try."

Kaandor said, "And then he blamed me for our not doing maintenance that he had personally removed from our routine because he hated doing it himself. He's always been a petty spiteful lowlife. He made Wugyup's life hell; that's why he got out when he did."

Peeru cut them off with a gesture. "Going down the list. Trifop, it says you and Kaandor conspired subversively. Do you release me to show the attached log file, so I can figure out what's going on here and now?"

Trifop nodded. "Nothing would please me more." Kaandor also assented, though less eagerly.

Peeru forwarded a view of the recording around, drew it back half a minute from the infraction to establish context, and started.


Trifop and Kaandor were in the nose of the ship, staring out at the orbited planet.

Trifop was speaking "... been at it for a long time. How many civilizations have they wiped out? It's chilling."

Kaandor assented.

Trifop went on, "How much resistance have they overrun? How many fleets such as ours?"

"This one or the home fleet?"

"Either one. They're both bugs before this massive machine."

"Especially home fleet. Their idea of defense is going to be to shoot the chief shareholders out of the cannon, straight away. You just see."

"Yeah, probably."


Wugyup was the first to speak. "Wow, guys. There's a bit of good news for you. Their massive machine just hit another equally massive machine, and they're grinding each other down for us. It's not the same as the Burvix or the Gg. Not that you're wrong about the shareholders, of course."

Genlo pulled himself up. "Who promoted you to spokesman here?"

Peeru motioned him into abeyance. "He did say, much more clearly, what I was going to. But the main point is, this isn't really subversive. No one ever asked you to work so as to increase shareholder value, only your own. Next? Ah. Feres..."

"Sorry, captain. My explanation is no excuse: there's simply nothing to do on watch. Normally, we'd at least have to monitor the sensors and the engines, and listen for orders, but in this group... the Vindicator's sensors are so much more powerful than our own, if we went active, all we'd do is provide spurious echoes."

"I'd recommend doing something more constructive, but it's your value you're not improving. Next... Genlo. Disobeying orders in combat. Has there even been combat?"

"No, captain. He's referring to when we trained against Ilwrath."

"Go ahead..." Though I see that combat training counts as combat for disciplinary purposes.

"We'd tried it his way three times, and we died every time. He didn't want to even let us try my way."

"And insolence?"

"I muttered the saying about buying a hundred cases of nails."

"I'll have a word with him about listening to people, but in the future do try to hold your tongue. Let's see. Vaando's up for sabotage. He's not here. What's this?"

Kaandor took that. "During our first try at that suddenly resumed routine maintenance, he broke something. In frustration, he broke something else. He definitely deserves punishment, but only on the scale of docked pay."

"Nabek, communicating socially with a union agitator?" Peeru looked to Wugyup.

Wugyup laughed, leaning back in the chair. "I'm a union agitator, am I? She came and talked with uncle Wugyup about guys and girls and 'the birds and the bees' as they say it here."

"I have no idea what you're talking about."

"Do you need me to spell it out? She is a very young woman. I talked her through it."

"Why you, not, oh, a woman?"

"Because I'm her peer. I had her rank when I left, I have the equivalent rank now. And yet, I know all this stuff because I'm twice her age; and I like explaining what I can. Can you see her asking Kaandor? Heeran? You?"

"What about Nuun?"

"I could guess, but I don't think you really want me to."

"All right. So, what's the deal? Will you return if he's restored to Lieutenant? I guess that's a no. If he's removed from duty?"

Genlo shared a glance with some of the others, then said, "Actually, captain... we'd rather not fly with someone as inexperienced as you are either. We almost died, not in sim, but the real thing. The Mauler is a finesse and detail ship, and you haven't got it. The captain is ready to convert this to scrap anyway."

"Is he, now?" Peeru flared up with possessiveness toward her ship. "It'd be a drop in the bucket I just handed him. And yes, I have little experience; but I'm learning, and we need everyone we can get. The Kohr-Ah aren't going to wipe themselves out."

Feres said, "Oh, we definitely agree; but we'd rather lend our help... elsewhere. We have found positions, mostly. I'm swapping with someone on the StarRunner next time they dock, and so on."

Peeru hung, stunned. "None of you want to stay? Kaandor. This is your ship."

"Yes, it is, captain. But, well... dying seems a lot less appealing when it seems likely. In these exercises, we generally die."

Trifop coughed. "Captain, I have to get on duty in around two minutes. Permission to leave?"

"Go. Everyone can go."

As they left, Peeru stared into the wall. Failure crushed her.

"Hey, don't take it personally." Wugyup. Peeru looked up. He was leaning back in his chair. "You're not a bad person, for a shareholder."

"Get out of here."

On his way out, he said, "Try the hot tub before you go. It's divine."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 13
Post by: Death 999 on August 12, 2008, 08:06:20 pm
Peeru headed straight back, on the way reviewing Genlo's alleged insolence incident, then as she waited, Muugko's file. The 1038 took a long time to complete its docking maneuver. She rejoined the chain system and rushed to the command center.

No one was there. "Where are the crew of this ship?"

"Commander Muugko, resting. Acting chief engineer Heeran, engine room. Specialist Ndeki, engine room."

Peeru, conscious of wasting time, was about to take the controls and undock, but found the ship already had returned to its tow mooring. They must have rigged it to run from engineering. Good idea, with a crew this small.

She considered heading to the engine room, but figured they could wait. Resting or not, she needed to talk to Muugko.

She came up on his cube quickly -- it was kept near the command station, far from hers in the belly of the ship -- and overrode the lock. He was not asleep, but sitting with closed eyes.


He looked up. "I figure if they can get away with this, I can at least speak my mind. Damn the straps! It's just not fair! I've prepared for so long, and you come in and make it look so easy you could do it without any preparation at all."

"I have led before, just not in the military. Have you taken leadership classes?"

"I've been a leader for years."

"The first lesson is that giving orders is not leadership. It's the hardest one, that's why they put it first. Tell me about Genlo."

"What about him?"

"You heard from him that he had some idea. What did you do?"

"You aren't going to hit anyone by aiming away from them."

"What did you do?"

"It's crazy. I understand centroids, and that's where you aim."

"Muugko. I am not asking about his idea's lack of merit. What did you do?"

"We were in the middle of the battle, so I just said no."

"And after the training simulation ended?"

"I explained to him why it wouldn't work. I was very nice about it."

"Did you try it?"

"I ran some sims myself, after. His way was worse."

"Did you show these to him?"

"I told him the result."

"Show me."

The 'sim' was a piece of hacked together question-begging that essentially devolved to a single integral. Peeru started afresh, explaining the principles as she went. In particular, she pointed out the difference in information access between the simulation and the simulated aimer, and the concept of posterior probability.

Then she lifted out Genlo's algorithm -- it didn't use Muugko's code style -- and ran them side by side, rapidly, for a few hundred short trials.

As they watched, Muugko grew more and more nervous.

In the end, Genlo's method hit slightly more often, and used much less ammunition.

"He was still insolent."

"Insolence is a relatively serious charge. Just ordering him to speak clearly would put him in his place without doubling your investment."

"Captain, I asked for your input. You didn't get back to me."

"By the time I received the message that actually asked for help, it was already rather late, wasn't it? You'd already formalized a hand full of charges. Anyway, I was deeply focused. I'm sorry I was, both to you, and for the consequences. Now what do we do?"

Just then, a call came in from Zelnick. Is he going to scrap us? I guess I could just be a mining advisor. This is just another hunk of metal. Peeru activated the call.

"Let's start with the good news. You were very good on the mining. You stripped two loaded moons I wouldn't have dared to, without losing anyone or even taking significant damage."

"Thank you."

"The bad news is, you're out a crew. We're going home, and we might get jumped by Ilwrath when we do. We probably won't need you to beat them, but you will need to stay out of the way. Can you handle that? Seriously, this time."

"Yes. What happens when we get 'home'?"

"If we can't recruit and train up a new crew for your ship in time, it stays home. I'm not sure it'd be worth your staying behind with your ship, rather than sticking with us to oversee mining."

"If I can help on the mining, that would be good..."

"Yes, but if your ship is ever going to see action of any sort, you'll need to take charge, get things to the point where the crew can't bring a convincing petition to me to transfer them out wholesale."

"Oh, they did that with your permission?"

"You don't think I just let people work where they want, do you? They correctly pointed out that your ship is crippled by the change I made to it, which would be acceptable if the crew and command were elite. You, and I mean all of you there, are... competent. If you're willing to devote yourself 100% to being the best there can be, and making a crew that is as well, you can stay and work on that."

"I think we're better of with me running the mining."

"All right. We'll mothball the ship, you come with us here. You will participate in our battles whenever we're between systems, on the supposition that the... 1038 will eventually be back in the group. Sound good?"

"I guess so."

"Good. Get ready to exit quasispace in one hour. Zelnick out." Exit? That was a long nap!


The transit was made without incident. As they rushed behind the Ilwrath lines, Peeru finally read Tippy's message.

"Did you ask me because I, like you, am not a seeker of celestial mysteries?
Do not think that I did not believe them real; I had merely not sought them. I knew they would come in their time, like just now. There were things that are not quite sights, not sounds. They aren't really visions, either, since they were not images, but it had the feeling that I think those who have visions get. I just clung to the idea that we were not finished, and found that we weren't.
It was like being thrown through a long blurry tunnel at high speed, no wind in my feathers, no protective tears in my eyes, only the thickness of the air, like jelly, pulling away my body as I went onwards.
But it held on, didn't it?
I can remember hints of the things that Jay saw, and recall more details as he explains them. I definitely felt a bump when he said the new ship was provided. The most striking part were the little specks, which Jay says are the spirits of those dying, all across the universe. He was able to talk with some."

Peeru wasn't quite sure what to make of that, so she saved it for later. She had a lot of work to do, to prepare the ship for long-term storage.

Heeran was cheerful at her de facto promotion to chief engineer. Peeru did not need to draw her into demonstrating the scope of her capabilities - each part they touched, she explained more than they really needed to know.

Partway through painting a sealant layer onto the terminal guidance coils, Peeru asked Ndeki, "So, what did Vaando break, anyway?"

"A transformer. One of the best-designed transformers I've ever seen, actually. He cut one of the wires with a... one of these screwdrivery things."

"That's a bolt binder. What was the second thing he broke?"

"The bolt binder."

Such a little thing to lose someone over. What was Muugko thinking? Is he mentally stable? And the others. We didn't go down in any of the sessions I commanded. Maybe their lesson should just have been that Muugko isn't very good?

As she pondered that, Muugko swung up. "All done with the inner side. What's next?"

"Ask Heeran."

He moved off. Looks like he's trying to make up for his massive foulup by working constantly. It'd take an unnaturally long life for him to do it at this rate, though.

"Captain, who's on watch?"

"I am, nominally. If anything happens, a chime goes off and I can take care of it."

"I haven't heard anything."

"Nothing's happened."

That evening, he joined her in practice, and applied Genlo's technique effectively. He's beating himself up over these things. As well he should!

The next morning, Peeru woke to a message from Heeran, asking her to order Muugko to go to sleep.

She got him on the line. "Muugko. Have you been awake for three days? Go to sleep before you break something."

"I'm partway through washing the spare coolant lines."

She toyed with the idea of telling him to just take watch, which would probably put him to sleep, but she didn't feel like taking the effort of dissembling. "Muugko, stop. I'm not going to think higher of you: your problem is not that you aren't hard-working."

He glared at her, but went.

The rest of the trip was a sullen standoff, with Heeran's cheer only serving to offset the two officers' discomfort.

She hardly noticed their dropping by Alpha Centauri, only noting when Muugko put a derisive note in the logs about trading with the Melnorme. And then they came to the starbase. It was huge, larger than the trade-world station she had lived in for the bulk of her life.

And it was in a panic - the Spathi had abandoned the starbase just a few weeks after the start of the previous sortie. Peeru took the news without comment, and kept at the work, which intensified -- there was now no real possibility of its having to maneuver.

Kaandor was assigned to help them finish up the cold shutdown. Peeru could see that leaving the ship was hard on her, too, but she couldn't quite bring herself to be sympathetic to the woman who she imagined had led most of the crew away. At the end of the week, a seal went on the hatch, their cubes were removed, and she was on even more unfamiliar lines. Profoundly more so, since without the 1038 active, she had to use an unfamiliar computer system.

The first message she managed to open was from Trifop, suggesting a suite of tools that he and Feres had put together to ease the transition. At the end of the message was a starbase room number. Looking into it, Peeru found that it was a sauna, with a very comfortable peak temperature.

They don't hate me. It really is just not wanting to die. I guess that does override, well, almost anything else.

The second message was her berth assignment - an officer's cabin in the Vindicator, with title 'mining director'. I like the sound of that. The rest of the message informed her of the assignments of the other Druuge. Most had already taken positions on the Vindicator, with Feres on the StarRunner. She only now noticed that Wugyup had been in the fourth lander team. Heeran would work in the starbase shipyard. Muugko was enrolled in an officer's training program. That might do him some real good. I wish I could join. Ah, and it looks like Wu is teaching it. I wonder who's in charge of the cruisers now? Whoa.

The roster showed a serious change to the fleet. Three each of eluders and skiffs, the fury... and five cruisers. PorKoo got cut too, and they were a team captain!

With that revelation, the bright side of her situation became apparent: at least the 1038 hadn't been scrapped, and she was still assigned to the fleet. Things were looking up.

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 14
Post by: Death 999 on August 24, 2008, 04:15:43 am
When the fleet set out again, their course proceeded through mostly empty hyperspace on a beeline to the Spathi homeworld. Peeru didn't have any mining duties aside from ensuring that the landers were maintained properly, so she focused on the fleet drills. With the improvements to her outlook, she felt comfortable calling out to her old bridge crew to back her up. Fwiffo demanded that Feres help him, but Zelnick was easier with letting her use Genlo and Trifop. She was glad to keep the connection to the crew that would likely be reassigned to her if the 1038 ever came out of storage.

In the new team setup, she was attached permanently to the adversarial group, whatever it happened to be. Though this didn't help her get any better with the Mauler specifically, she gathered a greater grasp of general tactics.

In particular, these sessions involved dancing around in an Eluder, which was a profoundly different experience than piloting a Marauder.

The new cruiser additions put enough missiles in motion that evading them all was a significant challenge, even for the more experienced captains. The allied fleet could afford to concentrate fire while soaking up or intercepting the weaker Eluder weaponry. They only became a threat in overwhelming numbers.

Other exercises were against the Kohr-Ah, and the Ur-Quan.

The trip to Spathiwa seemed to take forever - people joked it would be faster to just try every single other quasispace portal, one had to be closer - even though it was insignificantly longer than their trip home had been.

When they finally arrived, the fleet warily advanced at high alert. After some time, Zelnick made a fleet-wide announcement: "It looks like Spathiwa is slave-shielded. Just in case, everyone prepare for an Ur-Quan adversary."

But there were no Ur-Quan, and no Spathi. Unable to reach Spathiwa, they turned to its moon. Peeru was not consulted as Zelnick sent the fourth lander team down to investigate the few remains of the Spathi temporary civilization.

A few minutes later, as the landers returned, Zelnick again addressed the fleet. "All right, everyone. Before I get started, I'd like to point out that it's fairly clear that our Spathi captains weren't in on this. I'm not sure why they didn't do this when they were supposed to be guarding us, maybe they were afraid of our unarmed starbase, but some of them were observing the slave shield on Earth. When they figured out how to make one of their own, they came home and did it to themselves. Now they're in a shell strong enough to keep out anything whatsoever.

"Except the Ur-Quan, and probably Kohr-Ah, and also to some extent the Chenjesu and Mmrnmhrm. Yeah, their plan has problems.

"But for the time being, it's strong enough to keep us out. They did give us what they claim to be a very powerful hyperwave caster. We're going to drop by Spathiwa and try out this caster they left to ask them if these problems occurred to them. If so, we might have them back, at least until they improve it to their satisfaction.

"Whatever the result, we know now that slave shields are not totally beyond younger races such as our own. We may yet free Earth! And all the slaved worlds, including our own Vela!"

"Either way, there is another slave-shielded world we know of. One the Spathi would have been assigned to guard. Betelgeuse."

Peeru didn't get that at first, but Zelnick clarified, "With the Spathi gone, and the Arilou saying the Androsynth don't exist anymore, it's unguarded. Unless the VUX were assigned to them as well; but we won't have any trouble outrunning them if it comes to it. So that's where we're headed after this."


The efforts to reach the Spathi fell on deaf ears.

So they set out for Betelgeuse, with a short diversion for a touch of mining.

At the next stop, as they completed their initial scans, Zelnick turned Peeru's words back on her: "When was the last time we found something really worthwhile around a white dwarf?"

"You know why I really said that. Now let me get to work."


Peeru woke up and checked the time - one hour to tonight's practice, which would be against VUX. She hated the intruder, the opposite of the mauler. She considered practicing a little before the main practice, but decided to hit the hot bath on the deck below.

Then the question became, use the chains, or walk? The chain system was restrictive in where one could go with it, and this wasn't far, and her leg exercises suggested she'd be ready, so she decided to try. And if Wugyup can do it, I can do it.

One step, and another -- hand on the wall. Even as she approached the lift, her leg strength was holding nicely. When the lift opened, it held two ratings with large gas cylinders. She tried to rush, to not waste their time; and barely avoided losing control of her ankle. Neither seemed to notice the extra care with which she gripped one of the handlebars. At the next deck, she hobbled out.

Her legs were complaining by the time she made it to the door. The partition had a good handle, but sitting down on the side of the small pool was an intense relief. She shucked off her uniform-parka, leaving what would have been her normal clothing in a Druuge-friendly environment.

She took some deep breaths after the exertion, which had to be extra-deep to compensate for the water in the air.

Only then did she look around. Three male humans were already in the tub, in very minimal clothing.

"Is it... all right for me to be here?"

"Aliens are exempt. Different bits."

"Except Syreen, I've heard.", another said.

The third added, "We can let them be exempt anyway, right? Anyway, is this really specifically mens' hour at all, or is it just an hour that isn't specifically womens' hour?"

The second lay back and closed his eyes. "Mens'. The girls get it first hour after shift change."

Just then, Peeru recognized the first one. "Say, what's your name again? I remember you being in lander crew two."

He looked at her again, more carefully, and quickly saluted. "Ian Fesch, petty officer second grade, drill gaffer and dorsal checker, ma'am. I'm sorry for not recognizing you earlier, ma'am! I thought you were... someone else."

Can we look that much the same to them? None of the others look like me. Well, Nuun, but she's much younger.

"Mr. Fesch, I'm curious what the lander crews think of the way I've handled them."

His face contorted. "Can I plead the fifth?"


The second one said, "He'd rather not answer. It's not that bad. Some folks, not him, thought you'd, uh..."

She didn't prompt him, and no one else said anything. Eventually, he had to continue. "... get them all killed. But you didn't, which they're very happy about."

"All right. What about reality rather than your preconceptions?"

Fesch shrugged. "It's not so nice to be a giant yo-yo dipped into boiling acid. But I guess the constant up and down beats having to go through all that mess at ground level, or not getting the goods."

"Anything you'd do differently?"

"Yeah. I actually would get us all killed. I suck at that sort of stuff. There was one time on the starbase... never mind."

The door opened.

"Captain?" echoed from behind the partition, in the trade language, untranslated.

"Who is it?"

"Wugyup. Are you all right? I heard you were <walking>."

"Yes, I'm fine."

"Good. It's hard."

"I've done much harder things than this." I'd like to ask him some serious questions, but this isn't the place.

"Don't hurt yourself." His tone indicated it was the end of the conversation, which suited her just fine. I really need to figure out who he is.

After a minute, she excused herself and, with great difficulty, stood.

The two steps across to the partition nearly buckled her knees, unaccustomed to pushing in that direction. What use is having these nice well-developed leg muscles, if they're all set to pull the wrong direction? As she began to open the door, she realized then that there was no way she was walking back to her room unaided. She was about to ask for help when she saw her chains out in the hall.

Wugyup, presumably. And... I'm freezing.

Fortunately, the second of the men came out with her coat. "You left this, ma'am."

"Thank you. Would you help up me into this?" She got her arms in, and pulled up easily -- these were muscles she used on a regular basis. He slipped the shackle over her leg.

"Is that how it goes, captain?"

"Close enough." She grabbed it and set it straight. "And drape the coat over me? Thanks, that's good enough." She set off down the hall for a moment, then had to stop so she wouldn't lose the coat after all.

Behind her, she heard dimly: "See the galaxy, meet strange alien women, help chain them up and put on their parkas."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 15
Post by: Death 999 on October 01, 2008, 11:40:27 pm
Peeru was not tightly bound to most shipboard routines, and as it had left her job responsibilities she was not particularly focused on social observation, but out of habit her opportunity senses picked up on the rising tension as they approached the Syreen world.

The first thing she noted was a general cheer among most men and a general dread among most women. At first she didn't know what to make of it.

The day before arrival, while she was eating and looking out the dome at the swirls of hyperspace, she overheard an increasingly agitated conversation:

"No, seriously, Bridget. I'm just looking forward to us having another ally."

"You weren't so sanguine about the Yehat!"

"The Yehat could very well blow us up in a few seconds, and they would! Unlike the Spathi, I get the impression they take their orders pretty seriously! Remember what I thought about the Utwig, and then the Supox?"

"I'm just saying, when we get there, you aren't going there."

"Of course not!"

"And I don't want to have to hear how you're deprived, either! It gets old real fast."

"I am not your ex-boyfriend, all right?"

"You will be, if you..."

"I get the idea!" He looked around. "Sorry, everyone!"

"Sheesh, Danny, way to make a scene."

A moment later, she was pelted by food fragments from three different directions.

Quiet enough that Peeru only heard because she was listening in, he said, "If I did, I wouldn't blame you. But if I did, it'd be because they did something to me up here, all right?"

"But, Danny, they do do things to people up there. That's the whole point. It's not that I don't trust you; it's just... I'm worried what they might do. I'd like you to still be someone I can go out with in two days."

"Ah. Well, so would I."

She calmed down.

Then he added, "And I'd like you to be someone I can go out with, right now."

After a moment of looking him in the face, she cracked up laughing.

That exchange prompted Peeru to look up more information about these Syreen. It was disturbing. Mind control... in the stories, it always ends badly. At least their amplifiers were confiscated or destroyed at the end of the war. But these are our friends? I suppose they aren't out to wipe out or enslave all alien life. But if they had the power, would they want us all as their slaves? Once they got close to that point, we wouldn't know, would we? Maybe they aren't so bad, but it's still scary.

There was little information to be had on the Syreen history, culture, or anything that would help Peeru understand the degree of threat.

So it was with some concern that she watched as they approached the station. As Zelnick had predicted, there were no guarding fleets.

Once they were within an eighth of a light second, Zelnick opened a channel and distributed it across the fleet.

Peeru ignored the Syreen commander's little speech, distracted by Zelnick's unusual behavior. He became very tense, and assumed quite a series of facial expressions.

Then he tried to speak. "I'm... we're... " He tapped something on his chair and the fleet-wide relay went dead.

Is she taking him over? I can't let that happen!

Peeru set her chains for the bridge. It took an agonizingly long time to get there, during which she wondered whether she, too, would be enthralled.

I should have been up front in the cargo area anyway, to ready the landers... then I would have been there right away.

She rolled in the back of the bridge; Zelnick didn't seem to notice her, as he sat in his chair. "Shall I send it over? I thought so. We're lucky I didn't sell both of them. We didn't know at the time! I just worked it out now. Well, we'll see. Ah."

Peeru overheard a screech of the word 'identical'. At that, Zelnick made a tiny triumphant gesture, then listened and watched at length.

Fenson came up behind Peeru. "Excuse me, commander. Would you step outside?"

She followed him back out.

Fenson continued, "I know it didn't look like there was a very solid reason for this communication to be private, but it really is."

"I was just checking to see if he was under mind control."

"Is he himself?"

"Seems so."

"Good." His tone remained stern.

Eager to deflect attention, she moved on. "Now, I guess I'll go get us ready for mining. Some of those planets looked promising."

She called up the crews and began checking over the equipment herself.

Just as the first lander crewmembers began to trickle in, Zelnick issued a call for all captains to confer.

Peeru told the lander crews to stand by, and went back to the bridge.

Zelnick stood and stared at the huge map. The trace of the Vindicator's path to this point was outlined on it, and a wide circle was centered on Betelgeuse.

Various of the fleet's captains -- all but the Arilou -- popped up in viewscreen segments around the map; there were several unfamiliar human faces.

Without noticing her, he went on. "All right everyone. The Syreen want to join us, and they know their ships were stored on a body in orbit of a red or orange star around this range of Betelgeuse. As you can see, there are a fair number of options. Ideas on how to proceed?"

Abrams said, "Can you release the recording of that conversation to us? This is a little sudden."

Zelnick blushed a little. "Uh. Yeah. Here you go. Just got a little nervous with everyone watching, this time."

"I doubt they'd trust some of their thralls with something like this. Not the Spathi, not the Umgah, and not the Yehat."

Jay broke in. "I see it... the planet is a bowl of grubs - cold, wiggly, and green."

Zelnick squinted. "Are you saying the Ur-quan built a vault on a planet that's seriously tectonically active? Anyway, do you have anything that would actually help us find it?"

"Let me look at it cosmically... astral spirits... guide me, how should we go there? Up... above? and... off to the left... and down the drain. Spirits, maybe it has been a while since you have been in this world, but there aren't any cosmic drains here. No, there aren't.

"I'm sorry, captain. From time to time, the spirits enjoy little jokes at our expense."

Zelnick shrugged. "Those Syreen officers will be aboard any minute now. We'll need a liaison. What officers have some room in their work schedules, and aren't human males? Talana specifically said we should avoid that mix. Abrams, is Chen free?"

"I suggest you look behind you."

Zelnick turned, and saw Peeru. "Uh, right. Want the job?"

More connections could be useful; though I've never been all that good at exploiting them, they were better than not having them. "Sure. About the vault planet, I'd open a position on it being in their territory. If so, and discounting where you've visited, there are only four candidate stars."

Zelnick looked at the map, entered another constraint, and nodded. "That's fairly deep into Ur-Quan territory."

"Some are, some aren't."

"I wouldn't totally rule out those to the south. The Androsynth and VUX were very reliable."

Snelopy said, "They wouldn't trust anyone with that."

A chime interrupted them; Zelnick turned to Peeru. "Our guests have just landed. Why don't you go down there and say hello?"

She set her destination and  searched around the unfamiliar computer system for the means to contact the vessel, until Zelnick forwarded to her the message he had received. It read, simply, "Shuttle secure."

She looked up through the giant transparent inner door of the lander airlock, and set eyes on the golden shuttle. Its main feature was a large window, partially silvered-over. The venting complete, the inner door slid open, and the floor conveyors brought it next to the landers.

Peeru began to write a welcome, offering power, air, and water, and the opportunity to stretch their legs and look at the sky. Halfway through this, the hatch opened on the side of the vessel.

She set the message aside and went to the base of the ramp extending from the hatch. At the head of the ramp stood a trio of what appeared to be light blue humans, each heavily draped in indigo cloth and wearing a winged gold crown. There was something about them -- powerful, mysterious.

Peeru's heart raced as they sauntered down the ramp, side by side. They stopped in unison. The precision of their action stood in contrast to the seemingly totally casual way each stood. At first, Peeru thought she had found another difference between them and the humans: saggier skin and gray hair; but then she remembered a few humans she had seen with those features. A different ethnicity? Odd that that too would be paralleled across species.

They looked each other over for a few seconds. Peeru got the distinct impression that as long as no one was talking, they were getting more out of this exchange than she was.

"Welcome to the new Alliance of Free Stars."

The center Syreen stated, "I saw Spathi and Arilou among the fleet, and something else; what is that?"

How stereotypically female. Almost a farce. We can say hello, you know. "Aside from the Humans, that would be the Pkunk. We are also allied with the Zoq, Fot, and Pik; and there are a very few of us Druuge; and now, you." I feel like there's something I'm forgetting here.

"It is strange to see the Spathi allied."

"Well, about that... they backed out and slave-shielded themselves. It was, apparently, what they always wanted. So what we have is all there is of them."

The three looked to each other, and Peeru's head cleared. "I'm Peeru, by the way; and you?"

The leader said, "Rydra." The others supplied, "Trixia." and "Kay."

Rydra continued, "There is a strategy conference under way. We will attend."

"That would be this way." As Peeru led back up toward the bridge, Rydra rushed ahead.

Once she was safely ahead, Kay told Peeru, "Excuse her lack of diplomacy. But she is the best."

Trixia added, "Why do you keep it so cold in here?"

"Most of the ship is warmer; but it seems comfortable enough for humans in full uniform."

"But not you."

"In this coat, I'm all right." Except in my horns.

"Even up here?" she pinched Peeru's left horn. The unexpected contact sent a shiver through her entire body. She halted just outside the bridge.

"Please don't do that."

"It's freezing! You must be..."

"I'm fine. Yes, it's cold. I deal with it." Kahso used to hold them whenever I got cold. It was... inappropriate thoughts for this situation!

Peeru pushed forward onto the bridge.

Zelnick was telling Rydra, "One of the most powerful aspects of this is our Arilou-provided portal spawner. We can get away if we're in hyperspace. That won't do you any good, though. But it would let us explore before retrieving anything."

Rydra hissed, "And let them know we're coming? No. We must hit hard and fast, and broadly so they do not know our target. Preferably rain enough fire down on the planets that the demolition charges we leave will look like collateral damage. Are you ready for ten dreadnoughts? Twenty?"

After a moment, Abrams said, "If we come from Mycon space, they could think we're Mycon. If we avoid them, they might never figure it out. Do those first, and run away normally to avoid if they find us. Don't stand out by using the spawner. Then they won't know at all."

Fwiffo: "We're a lot faster than Mycon."

Zelnick: "I like that idea, even so. We don't want to draw attention to the Zoq-Fot-Pik by coming from that way, nor the Syreen by coming from this way. So we can come from the Mycon. And that leaves just one possible order. If we find them deep... this will be tough. Rydra is right: we can't just portal out."

He looked to Rydra for her reaction. She nodded. "And if it's in the Cancris cluster, or at Metis?"

"You'll get your ships."

"And what if..."

"Just a moment, let's get under way." A few taps on the console. "All right. What if what?"

Planning began in earnest.

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 16
Post by: Death 999 on January 14, 2009, 06:02:04 pm
NOTE: I would like to make one minor retcon here: ever since the visit to the starbase, due to her reassignment to the Vindicator, and presumably for the duration of this, Peeru has been a demoted to commander from captain. I have decided that going back and editing this change in would not be worth the effort.


Two days before arrival at Epsilon Camelopardalis, there was a sensor contact moving their way. It was too slow to achieve an intercept course, but it was clearly heading to cut them off on their return. By one day out, the sensors blossomed with four more contacts, none of which would get to the system in time. The Vindicator had simply breezed right by the outer Ur-Quan perimeter.

Upon their arrival in-system, Zelnick zeroed in on the outer of the two planets and swept in at 80% throttle. As they came further into the system, they found a dozen Kohr-Ah marauders, not poised to intercept. And so the Vindicator got them to their first destination with no difficulty.

Peeru stood by, strapped in to the now-familiar lander with crews that were no longer names on a list. As Zelnick guided the ship through power orbits, scanning the planet's surface much faster than its gravity, even amplified by their cruising drives, could ever cause. She monitored the scans with him. There's nothing down there, just some metal.. Minute after minute passed, and still there was no word on whether to launch.

Peeru set up a side window to monitor the progress of the Kohr-Ah in their pursuit. Already they were spreading out to prevent escape. When it seemed like it was already too late, they broke away and shot out through the widest remaining gap of the cordon at full throttle.

Within an hour they were in place around the inner planet, and had at least an hour and a half of breathing room before they would be interrupted. This time, Zelnick satisfied himself with a quick scan on the main planet before moving on to the moon.

A moment after that scan began, a loud 'ping' rang out. The lander crew cheered. First system? This was about as easy as this could possibly be!

"Chief, don't hold back this time." I may still be poor at walking, but this suit helps, and even more now that it's been modified for me... oof!

The Vindicator was a dot in the distance in just a moment. Focusing her attention ahead, she fought terror: the ground was approaching much more quickly than it had in their practice runs in Alpha Kepler. And it was green, and cloud-covered, with electrical arcs flying incessantly. And I had been hoping for a nice tectonically dead airless moon, like we practiced on.

The lander entered the clouds and immediately swung to horizontal hard enough to strain their artificial gravity system's ability to compensate. The fog they flew through totally blocked the visible spectrum, so Peeru switched to infrared, then deep infrared. The ship around her blazed, but outside she could see the terrain, and the enormous vault looming before them. The pilot swung them around and retrothrusted just enough that they settled on the lower rim of the vault, below the top edge.

A moment later, a tremendous volley of lightning struck. Not the lander, but the vault's top edge, where a spike emerged from the edge and drew away the shock. If that had hit us, that would have been the end of it. Yikes.

The resulting thunder was deafening, but Peeru figured that chief Hourin was telling everyone to get to their positions. Where are the Syreen? They are[/i] my position. What if they're out... there?[/i]

She followed the crews out through the billowing vapors, produced as the warmth of their suits evaporated the dry ice on the ground, and refroze in mid-air. Where are they? Can't get a signal through this interference in just my suit... A gust of wind nearly knocked her over. She compared what she could see of the structure to the hastily compiled composite photo and diagram that had been loaded just before launch.

Hourin reported, "Charges set! Commander?"

"Hop around the rim, that way. This isn't the way in."

She crawled against a vicious cross-wind back into the lander; the crowd followed. Without even fully sealing the lander's hatch, they glided around the perimeter by around thirty degrees, more or less, and repeated. Peeru remained inside.

This time they were delayed by a rumble of enormous proportions, which swept over the ground like a deep ocean wave. This image did not occur to Peeru at the time, as she had never seen an ocean, and she hadn't seen much of stable ground either, but she knew it meant trouble. The vault's suspension system mitigated the bump, but the crew ducked under the lander to avoid the flying rocks. One the size of her head smashed into the lander's windshield, leaving a mark.

They did not waste any further time getting going. The next hop took them to the vault's entrance, which was getting crowded: the shuttle was in one corner, and the other lander splayed across the middle. The pilot nudged it out of the way, and all three were in.

The outer door closed, and the outside's tempest was cut off like a light. Once the heat from the ships' propulsion systems had boiled the fog to transparency, Peeru saw the handful of Syreen at the control panel in the corner.

A few moments later, the descent began. Let's hope their memories of this taking only ten minutes were around right...

Though two of the lander crew were jubilant about their getting this far, the sense that there were still so many things that could go wrong pervaded the team.

She stepped out. Over the radio, she called out, "Peeru here. Our fuel stocks are secure. Do lander 2 and shuttle also report okay?"

Trixia was on the other end of the voice connection. "Yes, we're all set. Let your feeder lines loose and get ready to pump us up."

Peeru glanced over her shoulder to the chief, and gestured down.

Hourin hit a switch, and with a muffled clatter, a pair of enormous hoses uncoiled from where the cargo bays usually were. "All right, let's give those girls some hot lovin'!" The rest of the crew headed down the hatch.

Peeru continued towards the Syreen who were out already, but before she could make it, they headed back into the shuttle. One was limping, and Peeru recognized a massive electrical burn mark across her left leg. They must have had to open this from outside. Yikes!

So she watched the two lander crews get the fuelling lines ready. After a minute of that, the Syreen captains filed out of the shuttle, all in jetpack suits.

Without warning, the elevator ceased to have walls on the sides. Kay offered her viewpoint camera stream up; Peeru hooked into its view of the densely packed penetrators, This is going to be a traffic control nightmare. As Kay leapt off towards her assigned ship, Peeru dropped the viewpoint, set up a model of the vault layout, and began to devise a takeoff pattern.

This plan ended up worthless, as some Syreen captains had much easier times than others readying their ships. This made the process lengthier, but far easier for Peeru: only a few ships at a time needed to fill up. Still, Peeru was kept busy juggling ships until all sixty seven were ready.

Their part of the job done, Peeru checked the time. Launch was eighty four minutes ago. The Vindicator should be back in orbit now from its time decoying around the planet. "Drop the lines and let's go!"

Even before the last lander crew were back in place, the vault doors were open. The landers took off as the penetrators waited for their all-clear.

The atmosphere rushed past and they were into black sky before Peeru could even remember worry about the weather.

The chief frowned. "No sign of the Vindicator... Ah, here it is, coming round. Boosting..."

Zelnick got her on the line even as Hourin was slipping into the tractor funnel. "Everything all right down there?"

"Yes, sir!"

Title: Re: Peeru Fanfic
Post by: Death 999 on January 14, 2009, 06:14:48 pm
The announcement went fleetwide, "Hold onto your seats, we're going to have to do some serious distracting."

The moment the second lander was aboard, even before the outer airlock door closed, the Vindicator straightened out its burn and left orbit, aiming for the flank of the Kohr-Ah.

The lander teams stuck with their craft, securing everything for varying maneuvering, and returning unspent fuel to the ship's main tanks.

Peeru oversaw without having anything to really contribute, so she kept her silence.

This took a few minutes, and as they were wrapping it up, the fleetwide announcement came, "One minute to contact. Two marauders in this group. We have two minutes to wrap this engagement up before we get locked in with three more. Remember to stagger fire."

The lander crews rushed aftward. My fate and all our fates, out of my hands. I don't even have a combat station here. She found herself moving to the bridge, and got in just before the room sealed off. She almost didn't recognize Zelnick in his vacuum suit. She put her helmet back on.

And then the fleets' cruising fields were entangled. The allies launched a missile bombardment optimized to draw out defensive plasma rings. It was a partial success, in that the Kohr-Ah were unable to respond on the offense immediately. They're putting up blade defenses instead of going on the offense. They know we're in a rush. We should have my mauler here, to knock them out of that defensive screen. How could I let this happen? Why couldn't I have argued we were vital? Why couldn't I have not shot up the Gold?

Well before the two minute mark, Zelnick called out, "All ships, back to tractor berths immediately! We have twenty seconds. Ten. Good...!"

The marauders, seeing the retreat, went onto the offense. Blades flashed out, and hit. And again, blades were launched.

The Vindicator wrested free of the entanglement with the Marauders and snapped back into high-speed cruise. To further distract, they dashed towards the second planet again.

At first, they were pursued. After half a minute, several of the of the marauders broke off and headed back towards the moon with the penetrators.

Zelnick muttered under his breath, then slammed the button to send the takeoff call. The Syreen ships appeared as a fuzzy mass on the sensors, and all of the Kohr-Ah turned to pursue.

"They'll make it out of the system all right. Let's get outside, then..." The Vindicator accelerated hard towards the edge of the system.

Zelnick brought up the captains. "Casualties and damage? Abrams."

"One of our thrust pods is down, and we lost a few people."


"Three critically injured and one dead. Hit us right on the backbone. Structurally weakened, but we can still move and shoot." She looked away from the camera for a moment. "Make that two dead. We got the other two into cryopods."

"Do you need replacements right now, or... all right. Now, to improve the chances of the Syreen, we're going to have to head out-system and destroy the nearest battle group. We don't know how many of them there are, or what kind they are, but if we can do that, then the rest will be much easier. If we can do it in ten minutes, that'd be ideal. If we can do it in half an hour, that'll be adequate. Any questions? All right, get rest as you can. I estimate... two hours to contact."

The connection closed, Zelnick reclined his chair. "Good job down there on the surface."

"Thank you. Is there anything else I can do?"

"Yeah. If you'd run home to Sol and grab that ship of yours, I'd be much obliged."

"I was thinking the same thing."

"More seriously, though. You keep an eye on what's going on out in hyperspace. If this drags on, we may need to retreat. I won't have the time to focus on that. Remember the plan? You were there."

"I was running the other side in our sims, but I remember." Peeru sent him the consensus-confirmed decision tree, to demonstrate.

"Good. Now, would you leave until we hit hyperspace? I need to have some chats."

Peeru obliged. The stress finally ebbed a bit, and she finally let the claustrophobia of her suit affect her. She ripped off the helmet and gloves. That was better. The arms were a bit like big chains, in a way. And she was still wearing her knee chains as input devices, inside the suit.

After a minute, she was recovered. She plopped the helmet back on and got back onto the computer to review that decision tree. It wasn't long before she had it burned into her brain. As the fleet exited the system, she familiarized herself with the hyperspace sensors and the team operating them.

They could handle this job. Wasn't Trifop on sensors? Ah, not hyperspace sensors. Well, thinking on it, this is a real job - they get the information, and I call the retreat as necessary.

She glided down the ladder to the next deck, and into the sensor control room. One tech was idle, as the sensors were unusable this far from the heliopause crossover; one was trying to guide a robot through a repair on the outside.

"What's up?" asked the idle tech, transferring his raised boots from the spare seat to a table.

"I'm here to digest your results and pass them on to the captain."

"Wow, picked out for that?"

"Excuse me?"

The other tech got to her feet hastily. "Excuse us, commander. Your suit is mismarked."

The first panicked and fell to the ground before getting up. "Oh shoot! Ma'am!"

"As you were - I see that's sensitive, no worry - I borrowed this one from one of the lander crew. Help me get oriented with understanding these instruments, so I can make the call I'm here for."

The first looked to the one guiding the repairs. "Bridget?"

"You do it, Andy. This is still shorting somewhere."

Andy and guided Peeru through interpreting the scans, their limitations, the patterns of errors. From time to time, Bridget would cut in and correct or clarify something he said. Peeru asked for a few explanations of some principles, and ended up receiving amply - Andy happened to be the son of two scientists, who had grown up with a house decorated by three dimensional projections of high-dimensional manifolds such as the Calabi-Yau, and SzztZak sequence (that, at least, was what he said; the translation computer was unable to match these up to anything that would have meant anything to her). Once she had grasped what she needed to know immediately, she inquired as to the origin of various phenomena such as size-dependence in rescaling, and formation and shapes of hyperspace bubbles; and he was about to start in on their relation to the spherical harmonics, when they left the system and he had to get to work.

Bridget had not finished repairing the sensor when they left the system; but it was just one in the array. Zelnick brought up Peeru on voice as soon as they were out.

"This isn't exactly what I expected. See there in the southeast quadrant?"

"Yes. That cluster is moving north, not northwest."

"I'll be busy getting us ready. You figure out what's going on there."

In mere minutes, they were close enough to resolve the group they were aiming at.

"Holy..." was all Andy could say.

"That's eight ships, right?" asked Peeru.

"Yeah. Marauders. And we thought this was greenie space."

Suddenly, the straying ships clicked into place. We're in the middle of a Kohr-Ah flanking maneuver. Those ships to the southeast are retreating. That opens up a new hole for us! She put tentative colorings on the groups. What a time to show up. The Kohr-Ah are retreating here, which means we'll have to pass through both lines. On the up side, these might be damaged, too.

Title: Re: Peeru Fanfic
Post by: Death 999 on January 14, 2009, 06:42:11 pm
The fleetwide announcement came in, "We have more time to work with, here. We're not here to distract and run, we're here to crush them."

Bridget moaned. "Ugh. The bravado, it kills me. Please don't say we'll kick their asses. Whoa, slow down, Cap. Don't want to shred."

"Shred?" Peeru asked.

Andy supplied, "If you come in too close and fast, both groups end up spread over maybe a light-month of space, locked in pairs. We don't want to have to face the Kohr-Ah one on one, I think."

"But being close would be good to prevent the Kohr-Ah from having time to build up blade defenses."


Peeru focused on the fleet arrangement as they approached. The skiffs, the fury, and two of the eluders were shuffled to the right; the cruisers hung were placed at the left with one of the eluders.

On the Kohr-Ah side, they employed a circle, with the Vindicator on its axis. That would make dodging tricky, if they focus fire, and the Vindicator were slow. But... this is interesting. They're mostly already damaged.

As they rushed in, she saw the region's mass attractor, a dwarf planet from the nearby system; it was off to the 'above' in the axes Zelnick had selected.

And then the hyperspace fields collapsed without shredding, and they were locked in battle. The cruisers scattered, slinging nukes along a variety of curved trajectories converging on one particular marauder. The Kohr-Ah opened fire on the Vindicator. The Vindicator sluggishly turned down to evade.

The targeted marauder caught several of the nukes in a flame ring, but they were spaced so that it had to repeat to catch the rest.

At the last moment it could before being sliced to shreds, the Vindicator burst forth with full speed. The blades, on no useful course, were dropped; a ring of blades flashed out, targeting cruisers this time. That's massive overkill, and there's no way they can dodge all of them.

The Vindicator swung around and faced the cruisers. What are we doing? Where... "Hold on!" The Vindicator slammed into the cruiser at the focus of the incoming fire, bouncing it out of the way, and retaining enough momentum to clear the shots itself.

In the mean time, a second wave of nukes all landed. There ceased to be a ship at that location. That'll teach them to go on the offense.

Bridget said, "I'm all for percussive maintenance, but 0.2 c is a little much. We lost R2. Send another up, Andy?"

"We lost the secondary restriction coil?"

"A robot. Send up a repair robot, you uncultured colonist."

"Done. By the way, with us dancing around like this, don't waste your time on the GRD. Just get the squids up, ok?"

"Got it."

Peeru split her attention between the scans she was to monitor, and the progress of the battle. Having seen what their fleet could do, the Kohr-Ah had reprioritized defense, putting up a thick shielding minefield up... on the side facing the cruisers. The Arilou were cautiously inching in towards being a threat, more intent on being a distraction than actually doing damage; the Spathi were on the flank, sending out bursts of torpedoes to demand attantion, which for the most part they did not receive.

As for things in the broader universe, Peeru watched a screen full of noise.

Andy pointed. "That group has turned about minus pi over six."

"What group?"

"If you squint, you can see the streaks. That isn't astigmatism, it's their drive vector."

"If you have to squint, you haven't done enough image processing."

"Image processing done in the eye is still image processing. I can switch it off faster, too. See that?"


"That whorl. Two groups just engaged each other there. I think."

Peeru watched him analyze the event, trying to make sense of the weak results.

The room roared and rattled for a second.

"What was that?"

"Blasters fired. We're right above them."

And then a repeating stream of fire made all action impossible. As it proceeded, the room lights dimmed; and after, gradually recovered. Peeru looked at the battle: five damaged marauders remained; as for the allied fleet, one skiff had been damaged, and two cruisers were hit hard enough that Zelnick had relieved them of offensive duties for the time being. The Vindicator had just drilled a hole in the group's blade defenses. A flight of nukes followed, drawing out flame rings from two of the marauders; and a second flight focused on one of them, destroying it.

Along the other flank, Spathi dumped spaced arrays of torpedoes to test the blade defenses, slipping a few through, wearing the marauders down further. In one case, the ship released a flame ring to catch two torpedoes. That's not sustainable.

Bridget cackled with glee, and Peeru attended to the newly comprehensible view of hyperspace. That battle opened up a big hole in the line. Can the Syreen slip through that? Looks like no, not as things are. Too bad. But if we go on to punch through that group there, they'll be wide open.

"How big is that group?"

Andy whistled. "You want me to tell you from here? At least two. I would not expect more than six. There are not twenty. Dreadnoughts, 70% chance." And from their role in the maneuvers, they're definitely dreadnoughts.

"That's a long-tailed distribution."

"From here, that's a lot of information to have."

The blasters opened fire again; Peeru closed her eyes as lights flashed.

An alarm sounded, and they braced. Bridget quickly pulled her helmet on. The deck jumped.

We got hit, right engine bank. Looks okay for the most part. Phew.

Zelnick called her up. "Update?"

"If we go West-southwest and take on that dreadnought group at the end of the line, the Syreen will be free and clear."

A pause. The blasters fired a few shots again.

"When would that be?"

"Intercept in... forty five minutes."

"Other options?"

"They follow us South-southeast, and curve home. There's another group we'd have to face, here. This one won't be damaged, though."

"Okay... If that's heading... Okay!"

The fleetwide announcement came, "Great work, everyone! We kicked their asses!"

"Dammit." said Bridget.

Zelnick continued, "We bought the space the Syreen need. We'll have to do a little dance to get a Kohr-Ah group off their tail, but we shouldn't need to fight to do it. Standing down to yellow alert."

Title: Peeru Fanfic part 19
Post by: Death 999 on April 29, 2009, 04:18:31 am
The intercom flashed and an unfamiliar voice announced flatly as if reading off of a list, "Commander Peeru, report to medical 1 immediately for a paragraph 9."

Paragraph 9? I have no idea what that is. Must be something to do with paperwork authorizing treatment. But I'm not their commander anymore. And why the intercom rather than my monitor? Well, I had better go.
She was halfway across the lander deck when a crewmember leading an unfamiliar design of robot raced to her.

The human took her hand and gestured to the robot. "Commander! Would you get into this?"

"I'm not injured."

The crewmember said, "Very good.", and thrust her in; the robot englufed her. Momentarily she was firmly flattened her out, lying on her back. In her panic, she lapsed into the trade language. "What's going on here?".

The robot spat out her space suit and uniform, and washed her intensely with cool water, furthering her confusion.

By the time she was oriented well enough to say anything, they were gliding rapidly along the spine of the Vindicator, and her words would have been lost to the wind. Clearly I am a patient now, whether I want or not. A mistake?

The robotic gurney slipped through a special passage from the spine into medical bay 1.

Nuun was busy at work with another robotic cocoon, that one containing even the head. Nuun? Oh, right, she's our medic.

"What's going on? What's a paragraph 9?" I'm not sure she can hear me with that headset on. Looks like she's in an immersive interface.

"Paragraph 9: requisition of body parts for transplantation." Peeru strained to face the voice, and found Genlo, also in a robotic cocoon. "I'm giving a heart."

"Requisition of body parts? I don't remember that detail."

"You did read your naval contract, right?"

"I, uh, never got a naval contract." Plus, I was fired, so it, at least this part, would presumably be void. But that's a secret.

"Figures. Well, then, I guess you're not legally obliged to save Feres' life."

Feres. Not some random person, not entirely. "I guess they won't take anything I really need. So, what do we do?"

"Beats me. Hey, Wugyup," Wugyup? "When do you take our parts?"

Wugyup came into view. "I've already applied the matrix so you can regrow."

"What?", Peeru exclaimed.

Genlo agreed, "You mean I didn't even notice a heart extraction?"

Peeru amended, "You're a doctor?"

"Sports medicine, not surgery, but Nuun drafted me to help out."

"I didn't see any of this on your qualifications doc." And I thought him simple-minded? I already knew he was devious, but a doctor?

Wugyup looked down to Peeru's robot and began issuing commands. "You wouldn't. I didn't put it on."


He remained focused on the robot. "Just a moment..."

Peeru felt a cold sensation over her right side, and some tension. "What's that?"

"Just borrowing some skin. All right... and slather on some matrix..."

Warmth over the same area, and only then some slight pain, an itching sensation. "I don't have any skin?"

He looked up to her. "Plenty, though you'll want to stay on pain meds for a few days. Also, now would be a good time to let me know if you want any body modifications. I rather enjoyed having a tail."

"Tail? Like one of those fake Burvixese martial arts freaks?"

"Not for you? The usual candidates for enhancement seem in order, so perhaps you'd like a storage pouch? Or a sex change?"

"Now you're just playing with me."

"If you ever return home, think of the prestige elective surgery has. It doesn't so much matter what, as the mere fact that you did it."

Peeru lay in stunned silence, reexamining hundreds of reactions she had seen, but she set the line of thought aside for later. "Why did you understate your qualifications? How did you do it?"

He answered as he seemingly returned focus to the robot. "I knew some people in personnell who could get those things tossed out of my record on invented technicalities that would last as long as I didn't challenge them. That lowered my qualifications to the point that they could transfer me to a trainee positon on the 1038, the first ship in line to be sold."

"Because you hated working for the Crimson Corporation that much?"

"Because I figured whoever bought it would fight the Kohr-Ah." He stopped. Is that... I wish I could read him.

Unable to resolve Wugyup's state of mind, she asked Genlo, "Did you know all that?"

Genlo was asleep.

"Did he know all that?"

Peeru didn't hear the answer, as a postoperative coma took hold.


Peeru half-woke, and her thoughts settled on body modification. It was undeniable that there was a tendency for the well-off to do it, though mainly those who had outward-facing positions, like Foomp - if only his rejuvenated horns and drawn-up nose. On the other hand, those who became really well-off all ended up with some exterior exposure - connections.

And moreover, the tail was always seen as an aggressive modification, which suited her new role. She imagined various scenarios of her return, muddled, implausible. She abandoned them and just considered tails. As a child, when she had learned about their evolutionary forebears, vine-dwellers light enough that the square-cube law didn't prohibit leaping about wildly, she had envied them.

She allowed herself some fantasies of swinging through the vines and spires, partially due to her repression centers being not up to full strength yet, and partially for the practical effect that doing so would hasten her return to mobility.

And it wasn't long before she felt movement, as proprioception leaked back in. Her brain having a connection to the outside sped the reconnection of the other senses. Touch followed shortly - some itching; then temperature - cool, but not uncomfortable; then wetness - dry; then with a big breath she could smell the metallic air, and all at once she could see and hear. She was in a medical bay, lying on her left side, in dim light.

The bed in front of her held someone in a cocoon - from there she could not tell if it was Feres or someone else. She herself was out of the robot, in a tight-fitting mesh coverall. Who dressed me? Perhaps the robot did? I hope so.

She began to sit up, pushing up with her right hand. Through the painkillers, she could tell that her hand was not happy with that use, so she worked her way up without it. With her left hand, she probed the tender spots. In reaction, parts of her body convulsed. Feeling the strong reaction only through proprioception without any idea why it ought to be so strong was bizarre, but she didn't feel like playing with it.

Sensing an unfamiliar tension in her rear, she felt her back. There was a bump there, and a growing feeling - the beginnings of a tail. "Hey! What is this?", she slurred out in the trade language with a half-responsive vocal system. She repeated, louder, dismayed by her inability to speak coherently.

A few words flashed on a monitor, and she stared at them, unable to translate. Momentarily a human entered and whispered something to her briefly.

Yeah, yeah, be quiet or something. I have a tail I didn't order! I'm going to sue! If they have that around here.

The human gestured to the door. Peeru turned to it, felt dizzy, and lay down. Oh no, don't you leave. I'm lodging a complaint immediately! She raised her good arm and pointed distinctly to her tail.

The human took a look at it and said something. Peeru forced herself to focus and interpret what had been said. The human left before she finished, but she eventually did understand: "I'll get your doctor."

Peeru focused on recovering her hard-won language skills. To do that, she would have to recover the rest of her various abstraction facilities which she was no longer using automatically without specific attention. First, she focused on the constructive learning facility, recalling the exercises as a violinist might warm up with a scale. She had not done this in many years. Incidents from when she had learned how to learn flooded back in. Long before she finished even a lesser restatement, the facility was readily within her grasp again. But she continued, thinking more on the events of the time as she did.

Repeating the greater restatement with Kahso, as he struggled to formalize his intuitions. Then turning around and him training me on speech, driving me to drill its abstraction center to be so fast it could rival the intuitive. And then going further and speaking backwards, or fluidly mixing in ancient local languages, and then also Burvixese and Utwig. He wanted to get me back for confusing him incessantly with the derivative identities and changes of variables, and oh, did it work. And he never did let up, even when the crash hit.

She started in on the linguistic abstraction center. And he pushed me harder during the crash, didn't he? He knew just how bad it'd be. And I argued against, citing numbers. All of them undermined by gradual redefinitions of the metrics, or leaving the domain of applicability of the underlying theory. He relied on the body language of the executives and analysts. Those weren't bases for being so harsh, I argued. He wasn't my manager.

I really downsized myself with that move, didn't I?

It was fortunate that she had already restored a full grasp of her abstract linguistic abilities, because the distraction from that realization brought an abrupt end to the exercise.

Sure, the proximate causes of us separating were intense arguments over other things, but that was the irritant that got the whole mess started. He positioned me perfectly to thrive, and I... I need to repay him, but how? The astronomical distance is nothing compared to his being in a PIRR with... whats-her-name, the VP of Development. And now that I think on it, his commenting that he prefers his women feminine -- that stung! -- is sort of nonsensical considering how hard he was drilling languages into me. Did that have some hidden meaning? Or was it just smokescreen so she wouldn't go after me? Yes, on second thought, I think it must have been. So I'm still in debt to him. That's better than it was, actually.

"So, looks like you're done. Back with us?" Wugyup. He was leaning against the wall. It was a different room, lighter. "The night nurse said you were awake and aware, if incoherent." He had been speaking in English, and she had immediately understood.

Peeru's tongue was still sluggish due to the medications, but she was able to compensate trivially. "'My tail'. This ought to be a noun clause with no referent."

In the southern dialect, he replied, "Just finished the major language chord?"

In the trade language, "Not the Genmol system, the Wuuzi system. And changing the subject is not a good sign. Why do I have a tail?"

He shrugged. "Nuun needed to get replacement matrix somewhere, so she set up an extrusion center on your back. It's not your tissue, you're just feeding it. We'll take it off in a few weeks, no scars."

Oh. I guess that's a bit different. Sounds like it'd be included in the naval contract, too.

He went on, "Unless you want it for longer. We could definitely use a larger stock of matrix."

"Why not grow it yourselves?"

"You're the only one it wouldn't interfere with work. Speaking of which, you have messages."

"About what?"

"I'm a doctor, not your secretary." He handed it to her and turned to leave. "Want some privacy?"

"Yes. Wait. Privacy. Who dressed me?"

He shrugged and left. A shrug? I wonder if he even know how he's absorbing their manners of communication. Probably.

Title: Re: Peeru Fanfic
Post by: Death 999 on April 01, 2010, 10:47:40 pm
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