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After defeating the dreaded Ur-Quan, Tanaka and Earth's new Space Force Commander, Zelnick, live their lives happily running the ESF (Earth Space Force), as well as the New Alliance of

 Free Stars. The Kzer-Za fled to avoid being killed by the NAFS and Kohr-Ah, which still remains in the quadrant to live their doctrine, The Eternal Doctrine, with the old stranded team on

 Vela colonizing the world, the Earthlings had some good connections with the ZFP, Vux, who surrendered and offered an alliance that was accepted by the Public, and the Shofixti, who are

 no longer suicidal. The NAFS' first mission was to colonize another quadrant and meet new races! They went North and found the A'lahuunei quadrant, populated by a large team of Kzer

-Za, who were to enslave the races in the quadrant, it was quickly destroyed by the NAFS, and then they quickly realized there were only 3 species in the quadrant, they were the Plate'es,

 they looked like white Vux, only less aggressive, and 2 INCREDIBLE surprises were found when the NAFS met the other 2 races, they were the Yuli, and Androsynth, the Yuli sent a

 large team to another planet to colonize it and recreate the Yuli without the Dnyarri knowing. The Androsynth, however, sent a team to do what the NAFS is doing, colonize another

 quadrant. Back in 2079, when the Humans first confirmed extraterrestrial life existing, Skype was picked up by the government and became a tool for starship captains to communicate

 with each other, creating great alliances for both Earthlings, and her allies. The Androsynth miraculously had this given by the Yehat before the Ur-Quan invaded. The Androsynth quickly

became allies, while the Yuli and Plate'es were more difficult to ally, but then, Commander Zelnick recieved a skype call from the Orz, with the new translation system designs, they

could talk clearly enough for Earthlings to understand perfectly, they said, "Do not ally with the Androsynth, they are not good! They will make you go into dangerous dimensions.""

The captain allied the Androsynth anyway, but the Orz team fled back to the Vulpeculae system, and were spied on by the Chmrr. The Orz noticed, and attacked and started a war.

The Chmrr quickly wiped a large portion of the Orz out, and forced them to flee back to their home dimension. Meanwhile, the exploration team in the other quadrant successfully made

allies. And then Zelnick realized the Yuli ships were marvelous, great weapons, a large fuel supply, it was also smooth when driving, Zelnick said, "When and if the Orz return, we have a

nasty little surprise for them."


Continued in part 2.
(Please give me your opinions on this. it would make me really happy if I got good replies. :) )

If you're enthusiastic about writing you should join the p6014 writing team, but you have to be committed, we can't have random suggestions  in-cohesive with any part of SC2 or people leaving almost as quickly as they joined. Although after reading your other topic I am perhaps misinterpreting why you are "enthusiastic" about this new and improved HD mod.

"we can't have random suggestions  in-cohesive with any part of SC2"
Can you elaborate?

We have brush up on the Sa-Matra quotes as well as look at the wiki to see what people are suggesting as well play through the current mod. We can't have suggestions like "You know it would be cool if the Yehat suddenly turned purple for no reason", we need stuff that is based off what happens in p6014 and SC2 that matches up with what the Sa-Matra says, helps the story line progress, explains mysteries left from SC2, ect.

Ah, well, I might take you up on that offer, but I'll do atleast 2 more parts and ask you to rate it out of 10, and if you say 10, I'll contact Damon. :)

Well if or when you're serious about writing send me a PM.

Alright cool,


Part 2:
After the NAFS obtained 3 new allies, the Androsynth sent a majority of their fleet back to the Vulpeculae system after the Orz fled, The Plate'es also went to check our home quadrant

out. They noticed they looked like the Vux, and had a long long 4 hour conversation through Skype, the Plate'es about their biology, planet stats (tectonics, temp, weather, etc), and their hate

for anything else in the universe, the Plate'es quickly realized there is some ancestry in there, and the membership in the NAFS of the Plate'es quickly dropped, and they soon re-lifted

the Vux into their ships, (like Vux ships but the limpets damage as well as slow.), then planned an attack against the NAFS, Zelnick noticed their refusal to lend us some ships, and

got suspicious. 2 weeks later, after the NAFS had colonized a large portion of the quadrant, the Plate'es started eating the NAFS from inside and out, Zelnick noticed, (Keep in mind, he

is at mission control at Vela, he quickly asked the Chmrr to send a good old fleet to help destroy the Plate'es down to the point where they beg us for forgiveness and membership

in the NAFS, but they will simply have "the question," asked to them, that awful question is, "Red or blue?" (LOL P6014 RIPOFF, no, i see that scenario on all sci-fi games i play.)

After a week-long battle, we had casted a red slave shield over the Plate'es homeworld, (Alpha Canis Euoria 1-A), and seperated the remaining green Vux in their ships from the white

Vux. It was another war the NAFS could easily handle, after the huge NAFS fleet had colonized the entire quadrant, they returned home, shook mission control's hands in a feel

of celebration. The NAFS was theoretically undefeatable at that point, if the Kzer-Za returned, we to have a little surprise, their old battle thrall that suddenly vanished will attack them,

Zelnick was incredibly happy, he was leading one of the Universe's best teams of species, right by old Hayes' side, Zelnick could sleep so peacefully at this point, he would shake

everyone he see's hand just because of how happy he is.

Continued in part 3...

(Sorry about how short it was, there was not much to write about.)

Oh, also, isn't that already in the mod? Let me specify.

"Wouldn't it be AMAZING is the Chmrr just broke for no reason?"

I said to send me a PM if your serious about writing so I can introduce you to the discussion at hand about the various plot developments as well as see other people's suggestions which we have to implement in some fashion. The Chmmr don't break for no reason, if you joined the discussion you'd see why they break.

I did pm you, mate

1st: fix your formatting. There are a lot of line breaks in there that don't belong.

2nd: What you just posted is the view from 40 km up. This does not make a story. Tell a story and introduce background as needed. If you really feel it necessary, include a paragraph or two of background before starting.

@Death 999
Pardon me, *cough*
*deep inhale*
LAST TIME I CHECK, GOOD SIR, THIS IS A FANFIC I AM WRITING, AND I DO NOT NEED SOME STRANGER GIVING ME TIPS THAT ARE TOTALLY UNNECESSARY.
Sorry, had to get that off my chest.

That was my opinion. If you do not want opinions, then ask people not to opine.

If you want only positive responses, the qualifying statement following the quote should be much stronger.

To be fair, the formatting makes it very hard to read.

To be fair, I'm pretty sure this guy is just a troll.

I don't think so, not by any regular use of the term.

Because that's always worked. But to be fair, it doesn't seem like he's interested in writing for the same reason most people are.

At the very least one might not solicit opinions

From person experience I really don't think that's going to happen on this site, and intuitively probably for a majority of the internet in general. Many people will aggressively shove their opinions in wherever they want because they they think they are anonymous, even though you can use a couple programs to monitor information coming in and out of a site which can lead to an ip address which can lead to a physical location, and then there's still all the stuff your search provider stores which can be accessed by really any government official if they get a warrant to do so by claiming the access has to do with legal issues that can be resolved with that information.

Well, that escalated quickly.

No it didn't? Unless you're really angry that people can find your address?

and the next thread to get locked is........

is not going to be this one if you stay on topic and don't post completely irrelevant comments that would be the cause of the topic to be closed in the first place due to their derailment of the thread. There's still a perfectly legitimate chance for people to discuss the topic if they actually want to.

I didn't realize this thread was about tracing people's physical addresses via IP.

It's called a tangent and appropriately so because it intersects the topic at exactly 1 discussion point.

It's also called derailing a thread. (not that it was a good thread in the first place)

Derailing would mean there's no room to return to the previous topic due to the excessively high volume of posts relating to a single topic that is unrelated to the original topic making any post about the original topic out of place. People can still talk about the original topic if they want, it was as I explained, a "tangent" as there are only a few comments in a row that are unrelated to the topic prior to this completely useless tangent that was started for no other purpose other than to try and cause disruption and arguments in the thread.  In short, if you end this discussion now and actually post something that relates to the the main topic as well as not troll, nothing's going to happen to the thread.