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Angelfish
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It's great that he's picked up the pace, I sent him an email thanking him for his progress
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Novus
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Page 70 released.
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Angelfish
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fourteen dot gif! the guy has added a new closer picture too, I see .
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Death 999
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Huh. It didn't pop up on the RSS feed.
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Alvarin
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#72 is up
You know, for race uncomfortable with physical touch, the Loroi appear to be seated quite intimately with the Earthling. By the genre, there will definately be a "lights off" scene, but I think it's still too early in the comic, don't you think?
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« Last Edit: May 06, 2010, 10:05:54 pm by Alvarin »
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That struck me as well. If you look carefully, it's just Beryl who maneuvered in closer while talking; Jardin may have skoonched back a bit into Fireblade's space. Given the look on her face, this seems to be a bad idea.
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not being able to read the entire comic at once made me surprised when he asked 'WHat's a solon?"
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Is it just me or do the expressions on the alien's faces not match the battle situation brewing in the last few pages?
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Alvarin
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Well, they are not battle stations crew, as far as I understand, and their leader is highly distinguished. I think they are just overconfident. In addition, it is just the beginning of the story and main character is aboard, meaning the ship will survive no matter what.
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That didn't hold for the Bellarmine, so I would say more that nearly the entire main cast is aboard, thereby suggesting survival.
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New page. A bit of pre-action planning. Metaphor alert.
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Alvarin
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74 is out.
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Now we're getting to some action. Finally!
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75. If this is indicative of things to come, the production pace ought to increase (I mean that in both senses of 'ought')
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and 76
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