Ricoman
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any comments or critiques would be appreciated! thanks...
if I can hone my abilities then I am thinking of doing all the ships with greater detail
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Spurk
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Very nice! The bubble is translucent, I see. Are you planning to add any interior? I really like the writing around the ring of the ship. Reminds me of Stargate. 
Anyway, good job.
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Ricoman
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oh yeah, I am planning on adding a chair (you can see the Arilou sitting on some kind of mound when you talk to them) and an entire control panel. I'm also thinking about refining the details on the surface of the skiff as well.
I also don't like the yellow lights on the front; something about them bugs me but I can't tell what... 
thanks, and anyone else who has any feedback I'd really appreciate it! thanks
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AngusThermopyle
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A paranoid android.
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Nice job! Any chance of creating a view of the underbelly with the laser turret?
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Ricoman
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@Lukipela =
sure, but tonight I'm gonna finish it up with the laser and all so you might want to wait until I get the new version posted 
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Son_of_Antares
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Arioch, I summon thee...
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Needs proper background to be complete, other than that, pure awesome.
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